fic: bit of a moonlit stroll

[beeteedub]

Title: Bit of a Moonlit Stroll
Author: beeteedub
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: Merlin isn’t mine, this is fiction!
Word Count: ~4600
Summary: Merlin doesn’t like it when pretty ladies visit. Features jealous!Merlin.
Notes: My first Merlin fic ever.

Comments

[abovetheruins]

Oh, I loved this! You did an excellent job writing jealous!Merlin. :)

:DDD

[beeteedub]

YAY for first comment on my first Merlin fic! Thank you so much for your lovely comment! :D

Re: :DDD

[abovetheruins]

No problem! You definitely have a talent for it. :)

[magog_83]

Oh wow - I really enjoyed that! Jealous Merlin so funny (especially when he Totally Isn't Jealous). You've got such a lovely descriptive way of writing and I thought you captured both the characters so well.

And yay for that ending! Especially Arthur reassuring Merlin that his work is not yet done...

[beeteedub]

Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment! I really appreciate it, I worked hard on writing it!

I'm glad the ending worked for you! :D

[metonumia]

Loved this. <3 The build-up of sexual tension was very well-managed throughout, and Arthur being completely dense and just not getting it is just...so Arthur. Hope to see more Merlin!fic from you in the future!

[beeteedub]

Thanks so much! I love your comment, it made me happy :D

I hope you enjoy my future Melin fic!

[arthur_angel]

Wowee. Jealous Merlin is one of my favourite things. And I adored your descriptions of how he saw Arthur. I know how Merlin feels! Wouldn't we all love to run our hands over those taught muscles?! Very hot.

Write more Merlin soon! please?

[beeteedub]

Thanks!! I'm happy you liked the descriptions!

I can see myself writing more Merlin-it's an addiction!

Oh, and honestly, I would combust from the hot if I got near enough to touch Arthur (or Bradley James...whichever) :D

[beeteedub]

Thanks very much! I appreciate your comment, and I'm happy you liked the ending! :D