Forsaken [4]

Oct 05, 2012 16:04

Title: Forsaken
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC17
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, supernatural
Prompt: Adopted the prompt by kpopbee and written with her permission.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here :P

Summary: There is a war brewing for ( Read more... )

pairing:yunjae, fic:forsaken, nc17

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dilovesyunjae October 5 2012, 03:35:57 UTC
OMG!!!! this is just,wow, like, dammit i dont know what to comment. just wow!!! and jj tattoed his name on yunho? WOW!!! i would really like to see that in real life.

and oh wow. You are babysitting 4 kids? 4??? such patience!

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beeswaxing October 5 2012, 03:43:43 UTC
LOL! Yes, indeed he did. I was laughing hard out while writing that though. Can you imagine Yunho's horror at being branded like property? XD!!! Well, he left a tattoo on Jaejoong too, on his damn cock no less so I figure it's payback :P

And yes, I would dearly love to see that too OTL

Yeah I know. I'm a wealth of patience OTL

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dilovesyunjae October 5 2012, 03:46:50 UTC
teeehee...oh yeah. i rmmbr! out of all places to leave a mark, it just has to be on down there. WEll at least jj does it where EVERYONE can see... hahaha!!! and what jaejoong wants, jaejoong gets??? jyeah!!!

Patience and perserverance!

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beeswaxing October 5 2012, 05:22:26 UTC
IKR? He is the Devil after all and I guess the more erotic the place the better... IDEK what's going to happen half the time as I write this. That branding was not intended for this chapter but hey :P What Jaejoong wants, Jaejoong clearly gets and i'm powerless to my muse.

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rabanitchas October 5 2012, 04:16:11 UTC
I thank Shisus for the miracle of this being posted today! Amen

Only those who babysit know how horrible it can be! U_U

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beeswaxing October 5 2012, 05:20:22 UTC
Hahaha :P The kids aren't that bad, but trying to keep an eye on a 13month old, a 3yr old, a 6yr old and an 8yr old all at the same is a little hard. I felt like I needed eyes at the back of my head or something lol.

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jinsane226 October 5 2012, 04:31:40 UTC
AKSDFJ;ALDJF;AIDFA
YESSSSSSSS
JAEJOONG HAS WHAT HE WANTS!
YUNHO IS BRANDED!
HNNNGGG NOW JUST HOGTIE HIM AND TAKE HIM HOME JAEJOONG!!!!!

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beeswaxing October 5 2012, 05:21:08 UTC
LOL!!!!!!! You are so naughty. Despite everything, I really doubt the DEVIL will let his bride hogtie him hehehehe... And Jaejoong is already home ;P

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jinsane226 October 5 2012, 07:51:24 UTC
dun sass me i'll just get you like Yunho got Jae
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbeq2kh0pm1qdqipso1_1280.jpg
:P
Maybe the Devil is kinky and likes to lose control once in a while and let someone else dominate hmm?

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dulanis October 5 2012, 05:15:54 UTC
That was so cool... And so freakingly awesome :D

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beeswaxing October 5 2012, 05:22:43 UTC
Hehehe i'm glad you enjoyed that :P

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yachiru_s October 5 2012, 05:30:47 UTC
Yaaaaaay Jaejoong possessiveness <3 I really like every time they are like... "Mine" ... "Mine".... "Mine"....

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beeswaxing October 5 2012, 05:31:34 UTC
He knows what he wants :P I wonder how he'll react when he finds out all he's ever wanted was the Devil himself OTL

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yachiru_s October 5 2012, 21:14:29 UTC
Maybe he is going to have like a mini breakdown... like "WTF... i was fucked up by the devil..." then he is going to be too much horny to even care because "he is mine... my devil... and only mine muahahahahahaha" something like that xD

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