Forsaken [1]

[beeswaxing]

Title: Forsaken
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: AU, supernatural
Prompt: Adopted the prompt by kpopbee and written with her permission.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything apart from the story. I wish I had YunJae and if I had my way, they'd move to New Zealand so they can be civil-unionised here :P

Summary: There is a war

Comments

[seomse]

pretty spot for pretty me n___n

[seomse]

oh my god Nicki. oh god how could you think I wouldn't like it, this is SO interesting and fresh and all those details you added, the recurrence of the 6s and how the earth and everything that lives on it reacts to the devil....
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I feel like becoming a silent fan but hm... no I have too much to say. Anyway, seriously this is amazing *twitches* I need moar *twitches* (but take your time ;))

[beeswaxing]

No no no no silent! If you're silent i'll stop writing and protest cos this all happened cos you and April were so... encouraging :P

Well, as I mentioned in my reply to your other comment, i'm like drowning in fluff this week so it's looking dodgy for an update... But i'm gonna try.

PUT ON YOUR POM POMS! AND YOUR CINNAMON ROLLS!

[ladyelhisa]

Ohhhhh! this is very interesting! Will wait for the next update! :D

[beeswaxing]

Glad you think so ;-) Thank you for reading and commenting.

[dilovesyunjae]

holy...wait, there's nothing holy about this! that was too hot!!! *wiping nosebleed*

[beeswaxing]

Lol! :PPP I'm sure hot can be holy too somehow... Thanks for reading and commenting ;-)

[phinea2009]

Sinfully good start. Love to read what comes next.

Jaejoong is so beautiful here.

Can't wait to read more.

[beeswaxing]

IDK if I can write Jaejoong as anything but gorgeous...because he is gorgeous. There's no escaping that fact OTL

[jaehee18]

This is so pretty! I mean, the way you wrote it! With full details ; ~ ; alskjdlksajdlkas i love this kind of fanfics <3 i don't know why, devil!Yunho makes me wish i could be Jaejoong, lmao!
This is really interesting ; ~ ; and some kind of playful ; ~ ; and will be angst ? ; ~ ; i do not want angst ; ~ ; I just want Jae as Yunho's lover .. or even sex slave! ; ~ ; /gets a nosebleed just by thinking about it~
Oh my~ I can't wait for the next chapter~ I will follow this awesome story, just like I follow the others :3 and I will try t drop a comment :3
Thank you for this soon-to-be awesome story!

[beeswaxing]

LOL! Be careful what you wish for :P

Your comment made me smile heaps so thank you for that! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story ;-)