six kurofai ficlets

[beeskies]

i think i may be happy with these. considering the really bad romance writer’s block i’ve been sporting for some time. i'm so, so sorry if it took so long and that they are so few. :/ either way, i hope you like it.

anyways, all for you sweethearts from kuroxfai.

warning: proeminent lack of capitalization.

Comments

[fieldofclover]

OMG OMG OMG.

Whoa. You took such simple prompts and made them amazing. How. HOW.

<3

he feels his red eyes on him as he brings up a hand, a sharp nail and draws a red-red, red that satisfies him so, so much-line that must sting until fai sucks on it like a silent minute upon someone’s death.

/shudders

That was just... yeah. Superlative fail right here. <3 And I do like the lack of capitalisation; it makes it more immediate, more... powerful.

Amazing work!

[beeskies]

holy ...something. O___O i don't think i know how to thank you for such a lovely, lovely comment! i-i, thank you, really!

let's see if i regained the ability to word... the prompts you guys gave me were amazing to start with, and that one ficlet was the one that basically wrote itself. (which is weird, considering how i don't write so much angst. :/)
i usually write without capitalisation, it's a style? i don't know, i have this thing against capitals and i love the lack of capitalisation in experimental works. <3

once more, thank you very, very much, dear! ;u;

[fieldofclover]

Hey, I'm just thrilled you got something out of the prompts I gave you :D

It's nice to see writing in different styles, and it's fun as a writer to experiment <3

You're welcome and thanks for writing something so awesome to read!

[beeskies]

it really is fun! :D especially when i dwelve into the realms of psychological problems and borderline insanity.

aww you're too sweet, dear. <3 thank you once more~

[zelinxia]

What creative responses to the prompts. The last sentence on its own in Refuge is pretty powerful.

I like all of them, but the one that was the most touching was Alright. There's something about Kurogane's reassurance that transcends the language barrier that's really sweet to both him and Fai. <3

[beeskies]

i'm so glad, i-i don't even know how to reply. this.
hum, i think that's a statement i use sometimes when writing. because i think it says much about many situations, and especially theirs. <3
thank you, thank you very much!

[mikkeneko]

These are amazing! I especially like the battlefield pair set in Yama -- they say so much with so little. Wish I could contribute an idea for a flashfic, but I'm totally burnt out today. Perhaps in a little bit...

[beeskies]

oh, thank you, dear! <3 you are too kind for me. *u* and yes, if you have any ideas for flashfics, do tell me at the comment!fic meme! and since it's not fandom restricted, you can request more variety. :>