Depressing ficlet.

[cosmonautsister]

It's about Bill and Byron and a gun and it isn't sexy. At all. And I would give it a rating of, say, PG-15 (is that even a rating?).

Comments

[fox_bourne]

I really liked it :] I'm glad you wrote it.

[cosmonautsister]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

[underdebate]

nnngh. So I suppose that's one way to ruin a relationship.

God! This made me want to curl up into a ball and sniffle for a good chunk of time. D: You wrote it really really well (despite the fact that ow, my heart, I was kind of using that), and Bill apologizing and crying and gah. I'm hoping that Byron knew that the gun wasn't loaded, but some part of me thinks maybe he was just guessing. "I don't need help." I THINK YOU KIND OF DO, SWEETIE.

'scuse me gonna go cry now. (But that aside-- this was wonderfully handled and I agree, I'm glad you wrote it.)

[cosmonautsister]

I think that comment may be longer than the actual story. :)

It's great to hear that you read this, and you thought it worked (because I sort of didn't), and I'm sorry about your heart. :/

And yeah, I think Byron knew it wasn't loaded, and he just wanted to see what would happen (although, is that worse?). Anyway, thank you for reading, and I hope you didn't actually cry...

[toadclubber]

ahhh, very nice!
i enjoyed this a lot.

[cosmonautsister]

Thank you for reading! :)