oh god. oh god this fic was so.... I dont know how to put it. I was so pulled into it while I read. I wondered about the characters and I felt so much emotions - from giggly to that weight in my chest to fear of losing a character. i love how sehun thinks of baek even though he's in bed with his customers. i definitely didnt expect baekhyun to be an assassin so that was a good one.
this is really well written and I thank you for writing such a good fic. the plot is nice and I really really love it. what I dont quite understand was the ending but I take it that they found baekhyun and killed him and will kill sehun too?
if so, give me another lifetime to get over this work of art. I'm speechless and I'm not okay.
I can't tell if I love you or if I hate you. Everything was going so good, everything was perfect near the end, a fairy tale, but the end? The end was torture. I don't even know what else to say, just--- leaves tbh
i dont know what to say. i knew from some of my twitter friends' reactions that this fic would break me but i still read it and now i have no one but myself to blame for my broken heart.
ahhh the way you described everything around sehun was so so beautiful my heart is aching. i was really wondering if baekhyun was a figment of his imagination, but then smiled when it turned out that he wasn't. the sudden death scene was so surprising to me. luhan had me dreading something entirely else. the revelation of baekhyun came as a subdued surprise- i kinda guessed that it was him from the way you set things up, but it was so beautifully done that i still ended up choking on feelings.
i had a feeling that they wouldn't be able to run for long, but the end was so sudden and short and tragic- just as it should be, but it left me so crushed.
this fic was beautifully done, i hope your recipient kisses your feet.
really, i am the recipient, i forgot my pw
anonymous
April 9 2015, 00:45:46 UTC
this is recipient in for some much delayed feet kissing (see comment above)
how to describe, how gorgeous this was? i am in awe of how you could take that prompt and spin it into something so wonderful. i really am very, very thankful for how much thought you must have put into this fic
but my heart ;;; it is in pieces. but it's not the ending (because they technically die together), but because sehun's character is so beautifully tragic and you describe his inner turmoils so well and... actually i'm also crying for how broken baekhyun and jongin are
if you can't tell by now i suck at commenting, but just know that i appreciate this so much <3
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oh god. oh god this fic was so.... I dont know how to put it. I was so pulled into it while I read. I wondered about the characters and I felt so much emotions - from giggly to that weight in my chest to fear of losing a character. i love how sehun thinks of baek even though he's in bed with his customers. i definitely didnt expect baekhyun to be an assassin so that was a good one.
this is really well written and I thank you for writing such a good fic. the plot is nice and I really really love it. what I dont quite understand was the ending but I take it that they found baekhyun and killed him and will kill sehun too?
if so, give me another lifetime to get over this work of art. I'm speechless and I'm not okay.
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i dont know what to say. i knew from some of my twitter friends' reactions
that this fic would break me but i still read it and now i have no one but myself
to blame for my broken heart.
ahhh the way you described everything around sehun was so so beautiful my heart
is aching. i was really wondering if baekhyun was a figment of his imagination, but then
smiled when it turned out that he wasn't. the sudden death scene was so surprising to
me. luhan had me dreading something entirely else. the revelation of baekhyun came
as a subdued surprise- i kinda guessed that it was him from the way you set things up,
but it was so beautifully done that i still ended up choking on feelings.
i had a feeling that they wouldn't be able to run for long, but the end was so sudden and
short and tragic- just as it should be, but it left me so crushed.
this fic was beautifully done, i hope your recipient kisses your feet.
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how to describe, how gorgeous this was? i am in awe of how you could take that prompt and spin it into something so wonderful. i really am very, very thankful for how much thought you must have put into this fic
but my heart ;;; it is in pieces. but it's not the ending (because they technically die together), but because sehun's character is so beautifully tragic and you describe his inner turmoils so well and... actually i'm also crying for how broken baekhyun and jongin are
if you can't tell by now i suck at commenting, but just know that i appreciate this so much <3
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OhmyGod how to fic how to word. This fic was awesome I love how it was written--- very well written. Idk how to word anymore. I loooove it.
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