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moonbebe February 1 2011, 21:55:34 UTC
Oh wow! Such a great start! I love how you've written Jane's realization of her feelings for Maura and then preceded to show that tension and feeling of discomfort that she now has. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes!

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ml_spikie February 6 2011, 19:30:18 UTC
Wow, really great start.

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