Comments | beckyh2112: [Fic] Bad Cop

beckyh2112

[Fic] Bad Cop

May 19, 2006 16:41

So, I claim the Stunticons for fanfic100 and I wind up writing Combaticons ( Read more... )

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re dunmurderin May 19 2006, 17:50:59 UTC

That's ok, I picked up Combaticons for the Fanfic100 under my kepulver livejournal (link leads to my Big Damn Table) and I've ended up writing more for the 28 memes.

Actually, I need to start cross-posting those. And I have a few ideas for the color challenges and the Combaticons. I'm half tempted to do something 28 memes style and ask folks to pick scenarios they want to see using the ff100 list since that does seem to get me writing.

But, that's beside the point. I love this fic! LOVE IT! Love it!

Specifics:

"Awesome with a side of awesome" sounds like something Wildrider says with perfect solemnity as if this is wisdom from on high.

Vortex is so gleefully sadistic.

Brawl outsmarting Swindle by turning so he can't see his detailing.

Swindle trying to crawl *through* the ceiling to get away from evil bad siren noise.

The line Besides, who didn't want Vortex to do a meet-and-greet with a support pillar a couple of times? is just perfectly Swindle.

Yay Brawl as Police Car!

Dun.

raisedbymoogles May 19 2006, 20:48:32 UTC

*dies giggling*

I'd say poor Swindle, but I am thoroughly enjoying his suffering.

re: yes! dunmurderin May 21 2006, 16:29:08 UTC

Swindle's suffering is always enjoyable.

He's so easy to torment.

Dun.

Whee! cobaltcat_tf May 19 2006, 22:10:57 UTC

I love this, it's just so them! The idea of Brawl's alternator form being a police vehicle is just wonderful. You rock my socks!

Re: Whee! beckyh2112 May 20 2006, 09:36:23 UTC

*grins* Brawl as a police vehicle was actually Dun's idea... I just took it and ran with it.

*snugs police!Brawl and sets him on the shelf with femme!Brawl*

Re: Whee! cobaltcat_tf May 20 2006, 15:15:50 UTC

Hee, it's a very cool idea.

monoshiri May 23 2006, 20:42:10 UTC

EEEEEEE!

...how did I miss this? How? How? *pries Swindle off the ceiling and snugs him* *snugs police!Brawl as an afterthought*

I love Vortex and Brawl and their profoundly evil minds, and oh how I love your Wildrider. "Awesome with a side of awesome", indeed. ^_____^

beckyh2112 May 23 2006, 20:49:27 UTC

My Wildrider has a tendency towards ditziness when I'm not careful. But that seemed like such a perfect line for him! *grins*

*pets police!Brawl* If I can think of how to do it, he wants to play with Prowl or Streetwise.