Thank you for writing this! Damn, but that's good enemies!sex. The ending just clinches it and makes me cackle. Ah, Onslaught, you sneaky, pervy bastard (and Motormaster, ahaha, you're so clueless, sweetie. The entire army wants your trailer. ^___^)
Glad you like it, though. The idea's been nibbling at me for ages. Hopefully, it'll do more nibbling, so I can catch it when it's fully-formed and hold it down and write a story about it.
I like the idea that it's Bruticus, not any of the individual Combaticons who's hot for Menasor. Just because a) I like the idea of Bruticus being an individual in his own right and b) think of the humor value when they all find out...
Two minutes solid of hysterical, happy giggling wherein roommate tries to find out what the hell is wrong with me.
One minute of explaining to roommate that I have found out who the other person is who has offered to beta my current Combaticon fic and that it's the person who's been writing the Breakdown fics I've been telling her about.
One minute of explaining that said person has written a short Bruticus/Menasor fic followed by me cackling "It's Bruticus and Menasor! It's Bruticus and Menasor!" in a scary, hysterical, happy voice.
*SQUEEE!!*
Thank you! This is exactly the kind of thing that's going to get me through the dull stretches at work tonight.
And of course, I interpret the ending as, "They know exactly what went on, they're just making with the denial," what with my (not so) secret fondness for Onslaught/Motormaster...
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This makes me a sad Becky.
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(Tell me more about Vortex/Motormaster. *purrs up to*)
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And does Onslaught really know what was going on or not? It would be fun to read that as Bruticus having a bit of a mind of his own there...
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Glad you like it, though. The idea's been nibbling at me for ages. Hopefully, it'll do more nibbling, so I can catch it when it's fully-formed and hold it down and write a story about it.
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Two minutes solid of hysterical, happy giggling wherein roommate tries to find out what the hell is wrong with me.
One minute of explaining to roommate that I have found out who the other person is who has offered to beta my current Combaticon fic and that it's the person who's been writing the Breakdown fics I've been telling her about.
One minute of explaining that said person has written a short Bruticus/Menasor fic followed by me cackling "It's Bruticus and Menasor! It's Bruticus and Menasor!" in a scary, hysterical, happy voice.
*SQUEEE!!*
Thank you! This is exactly the kind of thing that's going to get me through the dull stretches at work tonight.
Bruticus/Menasor = OTP!
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*rolls around in a bundle of "they like me! squee!"*
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Kathy
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And of course, I interpret the ending as, "They know exactly what went on, they're just making with the denial," what with my (not so) secret fondness for Onslaught/Motormaster...
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Dear sweet Primus I love you. Marry me.
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