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monoshiri May 2 2006, 21:19:00 UTC
Thank you for writing this! Damn, but that's good enemies!sex. The ending just clinches it and makes me cackle. Ah, Onslaught, you sneaky, pervy bastard (and Motormaster, ahaha, you're so clueless, sweetie. The entire army wants your trailer. ^___^)

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beckyh2112 May 3 2006, 09:20:40 UTC
The weird thing is that while I can happily do Bruticus/Menasor, I cannot yet figure out a way to do Onslaught/Motormaster.

This makes me a sad Becky.

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monoshiri May 4 2006, 10:18:23 UTC
*petpet* Aww, don't beat yourself up. Offhand, I can't think of any way those two would work out, either. (Now *Vortex* I could see with Motormaster.)

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beckyh2112 May 4 2006, 11:36:12 UTC
I don't even need a long-term relationship! Just a one-night stand would do me fine!

(Tell me more about Vortex/Motormaster. *purrs up to*)

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navigatorsghost May 3 2006, 01:10:24 UTC
Ahaha! I love this. Brilliant.

And does Onslaught really know what was going on or not? It would be fun to read that as Bruticus having a bit of a mind of his own there...

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beckyh2112 May 3 2006, 11:17:19 UTC
*smirks and says nothing about Bruticus*

Glad you like it, though. The idea's been nibbling at me for ages. Hopefully, it'll do more nibbling, so I can catch it when it's fully-formed and hold it down and write a story about it.

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lunatron May 4 2006, 12:08:29 UTC
I read it as Onslaught not getting it, either. >_>

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re kepulver May 7 2006, 11:01:40 UTC
I like the idea that it's Bruticus, not any of the individual Combaticons who's hot for Menasor. Just because a) I like the idea of Bruticus being an individual in his own right and b) think of the humor value when they all find out...

Kathy

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re kepulver May 4 2006, 18:08:17 UTC
My exact reaction to this:

Two minutes solid of hysterical, happy giggling wherein roommate tries to find out what the hell is wrong with me.

One minute of explaining to roommate that I have found out who the other person is who has offered to beta my current Combaticon fic and that it's the person who's been writing the Breakdown fics I've been telling her about.

One minute of explaining that said person has written a short Bruticus/Menasor fic followed by me cackling "It's Bruticus and Menasor! It's Bruticus and Menasor!" in a scary, hysterical, happy voice.

*SQUEEE!!*

Thank you! This is exactly the kind of thing that's going to get me through the dull stretches at work tonight.

Bruticus/Menasor = OTP!

Kathy

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Re: re beckyh2112 May 4 2006, 22:25:22 UTC
... This absolutely made my night. Thank you.

*rolls around in a bundle of "they like me! squee!"*

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Re: re kepulver May 5 2006, 11:19:58 UTC
I am glad your night was made! And yes, I do! Your stuff is great 8)

Kathy

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Re: re beckyh2112 May 5 2006, 11:28:21 UTC
*re-collapses into a ball of squee*

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ravenclaw_devi September 22 2006, 06:16:58 UTC
Yay, gestalt-on-gestalt action! Devi likes.

And of course, I interpret the ending as, "They know exactly what went on, they're just making with the denial," what with my (not so) secret fondness for Onslaught/Motormaster...

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ravynfyre February 2 2007, 20:00:06 UTC
*squees with much clapping of hands and bouncing up and down*

Dear sweet Primus I love you. Marry me.

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beckyh2112 February 2 2007, 20:11:13 UTC
But I thought you were already married? *innocent*

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