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beckyh2112

[Transformers Fic] Our Shadowy Pattern

Nov 26, 2011 18:03

Title: Our Shadowy Pattern
Series: IDW Transformers
Characters: Megatron/Impactor
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2100+
Summary: It's friendship at first word. But it's the poetry that undoes him.
Author's Notes: Written for the tf_rare_pairing prompt 'Megatron/Impactor, i want to paint a love poem all over the sheets and you'.

( Our Shadowy Pattern )

character: megatron, writing, character: autobots, series: g1 transformers

Comments 13

ultharkitty November 27 2011, 00:33:34 UTC

That was really cool :D I especially like this line: The lines were twisting inside his mind, leaving marks. Awesome.

beckyh2112 November 27 2011, 19:29:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

niyazi_a November 27 2011, 00:44:57 UTC

Oh, excellent! I really love the worldbuilding you did, as well as their relationship!

beckyh2112 November 27 2011, 19:29:36 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Worldbuilding is always fun. ^_^ I like slipping it in where I can.

shiome November 27 2011, 00:45:08 UTC

Damn, I loved this. I'd been hoping for fic involving this pair and poetry, and this was excellent. :)

beckyh2112 November 27 2011, 19:31:10 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The poetry was the main inspiration for this. I couldn't have done it without my books. ^_^

lunatron November 27 2011, 02:50:24 UTC

I like Impactor's sort of blunt... apathy in this. He's smarter than he lets on, he sees life for what it is, but he... doesn't really do much of anything about it.

Megatron is clearly thinking revolutionary thinky thoughts.

beckyh2112 November 27 2011, 19:33:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It wouldn't have been as good without you checking it over.

Impactor doesn't, and Megatron is. ^_^

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beckyh2112 November 27 2011, 19:33:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.