[AtLA Fic] An Ounce of Blood

Mar 28, 2011 18:35

Title: An Ounce of Blood
Characters: Mai, the Warden
Rating: G
Word Count: 800+
Summary: Mai is eight and she is supposed to go to the Fire Nation Academy for Girls in a week. Only her parents haven't come to fetch her from Uncle Naruzi's house.
Author's Note: This is my second story written for purimgifts 2011.

An Ounce of Blood )

character: mai, table: 100_women, writing, series: avatar, character: fire nation

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beccastareyes March 29 2011, 02:17:30 UTC
Aw... I like seeing Mai and her uncle interacting, and that Mai actually seems to like him, rather than the eye-rolling tolerance she gives to her parents. And the idea he's where she learned to be so good with knives.

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beckyh2112 April 7 2011, 14:28:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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beckyh2112 April 7 2011, 14:29:05 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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unjapanologist April 2 2011, 23:21:40 UTC
Loved this. Little Mai finding an adult interesting/trustworthy enough to actually talk to isn't... sweet, exactly, but refreshing.

Is gardening a recommended relaxation activity for Fire Nation military types? Yon Rah was doing it too, and Iroh had gardening tools in his White Lotus tent :)

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beckyh2112 April 7 2011, 14:29:45 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Heh, I had forgotten all about them. ^_^ I'm just really into gardening right now myself, so naturally it carries through to my characters.

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