[AtLA Fic] Dealbreaker

[beckyh2112]

Written for 5trueloves.

Title: Dealbreaker
Characters: Song/Ozai, Hakoda, Song's mother, assorted Earthfolk
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 7000+
Summary: When the leaves were turning orange, a Fire man hauled a Water Tribesman into Song's clinic.

Comments

[weirdlet]

*low whistle*

I love how you blend desire and devastation.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

If Song knew who Ozai was, she wouldn't have gone near him with a ten-foot pole. Not knowing, well...

[weirdlet]

He does have that effect on people. That's another prompt I keep meaning to put on a meme sometime- 'be the flame, not the moth'

[arrayepl]

Great story.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it.

It took me about eight months to write this fic. The build-up and its payoff were what kept me going. <3

[sentientcitizen]

Well, THAT was not how I expected it to end! Talk about a gut punch - and a beautifully done one, too. :)

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Unfortunately, Ozai is one of those people Song wouldn't touch with a ten-foot pole if she knew who he was. And Hakoda is too good of a father to let a girl like her get involved with Ozai without knowing who he is.

[gigerisgod]

my brain is still screaming. that was incredible.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

At least I am assuming "brain screaming" is a good thing in context.

[gigerisgod]

yes. absolutely a good thing.