Long Feng Quick Meme

Dec 10, 2010 07:56

I just finished a very frustrating project last night, and I want to write one of my favorite characters. So. Ten slots.

I shouldn't have to say this, but if you haven't watched AtLA, don't make a request.

MEME IS CLOSED.

writing, character: long feng, series: avatar, character: dai li, character: earth kingdom, character: general how

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danatheleseus December 10 2010, 15:38:52 UTC
A scene with Long Feng and Kuei interacting. Preferably Long Feng showing his paternal side.

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Long Feng and Kuei interacting beckyh2112 April 10 2011, 23:11:46 UTC
"You're alive," Long Feng says, a smile lighting his face. He wants to go to his boy and hug him, but Kuei is the Earth King and they are in public. It is not proper to be so familiar.

Still he strides towards his boy, intending to welcome him warmly.

Kuei's eyes are hard and cold, and Long Feng's step almost falters.

"Long Feng," his boy says with distaste. "You're still here." His mouth hardens. "You have four days to change that."

"Kuei?"

"I know you understand me," his boy snaps. "Leave Ba Sing Se and never return!"

The world cracks, and Long Feng almost stumbles, almost falls to his knees to beg forgiveness for whatever crime he has committed. Kuei can't- How can he- Not Ba Sing Se, he can't leave Ba Sing Se!

"Get out of my sight," Kuei says, and-

And Kuei is the Earth King. He never took that from his boy. Kuei is the fifty-second Earth King, and he must obey.

"Of course, your majesty," Long Feng says woodenly. His heart feels like it's going to burst, and he just- he-

He doesn't know what to do.

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Re: Long Feng and Kuei interacting danatheleseus April 11 2011, 17:44:36 UTC
Oh ouch. Long Feng is an evil mastermind that uses mindcontrol and brainwashing, but it still hurts when the boy he thought of as a son casts him out. This is very good. Hard hitting and portrays the two wonderfully.

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avocado_love December 10 2010, 17:24:32 UTC
A moment of honest reflection in the deepest part of the night, after being out-maneuvered by a 14 year old girl.

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dark_puck December 10 2010, 18:28:43 UTC
"When the war is won."

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"When the war is won." beckyh2112 March 20 2011, 23:09:29 UTC
They're eighteen, and Long Feng and Chet both have their hats. Xin Wan still doesn't, but Xin Wan's the baby and he's grinning just as hard as either of them ( ... )

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Re: "When the war is won." dark_puck April 23 2011, 01:03:21 UTC
*shivers*

This is very sad, seeing the way their hopes are changed by circumstances.

And then, of course, Chet is murdered.

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flowerflute December 10 2010, 23:25:26 UTC
Fun? Glee!
"Why are you wearing a dress?"

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"Why are you wearing a dress?" beckyh2112 February 6 2011, 04:48:50 UTC
The young prince scowled and crossed his arms. "It's not a dress, it's a robe! You wear them all the time."

"That cut and that cloth is a dress, Kuei." Long Feng wondered if this was something he should continue to comment on, or let it slide. He did not want to encourage the boy to crossdressing, but he equally didn't want his discouragement to backfire and make Kuei dig his heels in.

"I like it."

"Why?"

The boy paused, then ran his fingers over the dress. "It feels nice," he said shyly, "and it's bright. Mother liked bright clothes."

"Ah," Long Feng murmured, a plan already shaping in his mind. "I see."

The palace tailors would be working nights to replace Kuei's wardrobes, but bright silks were a small price to pay for the Earth King not disgracing himself utterly.

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Re: "Why are you wearing a dress?" flowerflute April 20 2011, 00:20:00 UTC
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 You are always awesome.

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spyridona December 11 2010, 00:52:27 UTC
Other Characters: How or Shi Kai (or both? :DDD).
Prompt: Moan.

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Long Feng: moan beckyh2112 January 28 2011, 01:35:49 UTC
"Dog," one hisses in his ear, accent strange to the streets of Ba Sing Se. Strong fingers dig into his hips. His braid is nosed aside, and hot mouth sucks at the line of exposed skin.

"Butcher," the other growls, green eyes flashing. Then head is bent to a task, and he finds himself grinding back against the one behind him as the one in front uses tongue and teeth to undo the top frog of his robes.

"Toothless cur," and that one's voice is shaky.

"Illiterate murderer," and that one's breath is hot against his skin, and he arches against the other man.

Tongue swipes against the hollow of his throat, and his hand clutches at the man's shoulder. The one behind him growls, and teeth mark him, hard enough to make him gasp and thrust forward.

Other hands settle on his hips, war briefly with the man behind him, until he distracts with a kiss that exposes his throat to the one behind's mouth.

He moans into the kiss, and their hands tighten, and some part of him thinks, I am more terrible than either of you.

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Re: Long Feng: moan spyridona March 5 2011, 01:18:57 UTC
*purr* So raw and rough and sexy. <3 Very enjoyable darling. The Earth must be shaking and the walls must be warped. <3

Oh, Long Feng, How knows how terrible you are. Treat him poorly, and he will deal, but he will rage and drive you back if your ideas might harm others.

You're going to have to convince Shi Kai you're more terrible than he.

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