Comments | beckyh2112: [Original] Bones

beckyh2112

[Original] Bones

Apr 30, 2010 19:53

Title: Bones
Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: 100+
Prompt: a maze

( Bones )

writing, original fiction, table: story_lottery

Comments 12

flowerflute May 1 2010, 02:43:42 UTC

I don't have anything intelligent to say. Memory'd

beckyh2112 May 8 2010, 20:24:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

lunatron May 1 2010, 03:54:38 UTC

My first thought was, "I hope they are dinosaur bones."

I don't know what that says about me.

beckyh2112 May 8 2010, 20:25:04 UTC

You should bug DE to work on any of her stories with Satan. (Her angels are dinosaurs.)

beboots May 1 2010, 15:42:59 UTC

Wow... Those last two paragraphs really made me feel like I was punched in the gut, but mentally. That's as coherent as I can get.

Well done.

beckyh2112 May 8 2010, 20:25:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

hedgehog39 May 3 2010, 13:11:15 UTC

Okay, I'll admit that it seemed pretty bog standard until the last two lines, at which point it started to freak me the hell out. Nice one (I think).

beckyh2112 May 8 2010, 20:25:31 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

littleseastar May 4 2010, 06:52:39 UTC

That was so amazing. I am truly, deeply moved.

beckyh2112 May 8 2010, 20:25:41 UTC

Thank you! How are you moved?

littleseastar May 9 2010, 03:39:51 UTC

Hmmm, how to describe it? The sense of time and scale, the mystery, it's sort of frightening, sad, humbling. Like ruins of lost civilizations destroyed by some unknown force, that kind of feeling.

beckyh2112 May 9 2010, 03:41:44 UTC

Interesting.

*nibbles affectionately*