[Original] Swan Angel

Mar 22, 2010 19:05

Title: Swan Angel
Genre: Supernatural/Urban Fantasy
Word Count: 1100+ words
Rating: G
Summary: Chad went to the park to feed the angel.
Author's Notes: Because the presence of angels should be as frightening as the presence of demons. If I can find the rest of the story in my head (and learn more about what being in a small-time rock band is like ( Read more... )

writing, original fiction, table: story_lottery

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littleseastar March 23 2010, 06:47:36 UTC
Sheer awesomeness. Angry swan ftw. xD

I grately approve of the multiple pairs of wings, and the whole level of different being.

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beckyh2112 March 27 2010, 02:40:34 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I don't remember if it was Revelations or Ezekiel that I pulled the six-winged angel from, but it's a particular bit I've kept in my head for a long time.

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hedgehog39 March 23 2010, 13:53:41 UTC
Well done. I'd never pondered something being so beautiful that seeing it would drive you mad, but I get that impression from your angelic being here. Although I'm not exactly sure why it seems surprised that it hurt Chad from prolonged contact if it's happened more than once...

Also, extra points for researching the seraphim & their six wings ;)

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beckyh2112 March 27 2010, 02:54:11 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I think the angel keeps hoping that this time it will be able to hold Chad without hurting him. *pats it*

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dragoness_e March 25 2010, 01:39:03 UTC
Whoa! Cool!

And I note the six-winged angel from the Book of Ezekial...

And... that mute swan at the park sounds a bit familiar. Where have I seen it before? *wink*

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beckyh2112 March 27 2010, 02:54:35 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah, Chad is totally at Lafreniere Park. ^_^

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crystaldrake March 30 2010, 20:47:17 UTC
Neat. It's nice to see your original work.

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beckyh2112 March 30 2010, 23:04:02 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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