Comments | beckyh2112: [Avatar Fic] After Party

beckyh2112

[Avatar Fic] After Party

Feb 10, 2010 19:13

Title: After Party
Character: Ta Min
Word Count: 600+ words
Rating: NC-17
Summary: After Roku is revealed as the Avatar on his sixteenth birthday, Ta Min mourns the chance she has lost.
Author's Note: This was originally written for the Avatar anonymous kink meme. I like the ideas in it enough to draw on them again for what little writing I do in ( Read more... )

table: 100_women, writing, series: avatar, character: fire nation

Comments 6

lunatron February 11 2010, 15:16:25 UTC

Poor girl. Needs more self confidence! Go get that Fire Avatar, and bang him!

beckyh2112 February 14 2010, 17:23:06 UTC

Thank you!

She really does, but I figured it would be realistic for a teenager to go from "my boyfriend, we will totally be together forever" to "omigod, he is a force of vast cosmic power, he won't want me anymore!". *cuddles her*

spyridona February 11 2010, 23:32:02 UTC

Oh, Ta Min. You need to be more aggressive, darling.

I almost want to know what the heck Ta Min's been doing those 12 years Sozin. I suspect she's about Roku age (16) and 28 is rather late for the setting to get married. Of course, she turns out to be fertile longer than most women. >_>

So what was Roku doing while Ta Min was busy...?

beckyh2112 February 14 2010, 17:24:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I see your struck-through suggestion for how Ta Min is spending her time and HEARTILY endorse it. <3

rosehiptea May 15 2010, 16:39:41 UTC

Very sexy and I loved the little details of her clothing.

beckyh2112 May 15 2010, 17:22:16 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Describing clothing in smut is very enjoyable. ^_^