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weirdlet January 5 2010, 18:16:16 UTC
*low whistle*

Again with the not-really-a-smiling-fic-but-damn-that's-good-even-as-it's-emotionally-terrible.

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beckyh2112 January 7 2010, 00:25:45 UTC
Thank you very much. LaS Ozai is royally fucked up, and I am glad that comes through.

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beckyh2112 January 7 2010, 00:27:39 UTC
Thank you!

It makes sense to me. They still feel like the same characters even though events have shaped them differently, right?

That's pretty much been my goal with this. An evil, insane Katara should still come across as Katara underneath all of everything else, and even as the Crown Prince of the aggressor nation, Sokka should still be Sokka. Otherwise, I'm just writing original fiction in a way that won't get me paid.

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gigabomb January 5 2010, 22:10:00 UTC
Oh, Ursa. I actually forgot the line about you being a master firebender at the beginning, what with you being so sweet with Ozai and everything, and then you are going to kill the guy who takes advantage of Ozai's ingrained compliance. And it will be awesome. I can see why he got so attached to her. Thanks for writing this.

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beckyh2112 January 7 2010, 00:28:51 UTC
You're welcome! I quite enjoyed writing it.

Ursa thinks the man who did that was vile, and she thinks whoever did what they did to Ozai is viler. *strokes her* She will not like it when she finds out it was Azulon.

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littleseastar January 5 2010, 23:15:17 UTC
That is probably the most to-the-point challenge ever. Go Ursa.

I love the way you write Ursa and Ozai, I really do. This was really different, but it was still so much fun to read.

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littleseastar January 5 2010, 23:21:29 UTC
Wait, that wasn't exactly what I wanted to say. That makes it look like just being different normally makes things less fun, which is of course not the case.
... yeah, rephrasing isn't going to work properly either.
You're awesome, I'm going to get a cup of tea and try to actually wake up enough to express myself coherently.

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beckyh2112 January 7 2010, 00:31:25 UTC
I didn't find the way you phrased it to be unhappy-making. *ruffles* I got what you meant. ^_^

Ursa totally kicks ass. And I don't care if the show never actually uses the Agni Kai as trial-by-combat, it is totally one for me.

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blueflamequeen January 6 2010, 00:15:28 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I'm not one who easily feels any real sympathy for Ozai, and yet, this was kind of heartbreaking. Very nicely done.

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beckyh2112 January 7 2010, 00:29:23 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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