Comments | beckyh2112: On the eleventh day of Christmas

beckyh2112

On the eleventh day of Christmas

Jan 04, 2010 07:36

I think I started counting from the wrong day, randomly.

( My true love gave to me... )

character: aerialbots, writing, writing: twelve days of christmas 2009, series: g1 transformers

Comments 8

kyra_neko_rei January 4 2010, 21:50:42 UTC

Ooooh, spooky.

I love the nest imagery, and the wind and the wastes---little hints at the world they live in, making it fascinating, so that one wants to hear more about it but sometimes isn't quite sure knowing is a good idea.

beckyh2112 January 5 2010, 16:08:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Knowing is probably not a good idea, no. I think I will be stealing this setting for original fiction sometime because I like it so much.

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beckyh2112 January 5 2010, 16:08:13 UTC

You're welcome! It was a really awesome piece to write, and I am so glad you liked how it came out since it came out rather strangely. *ruffles the green-opticked madmen*

raisedbymoogles January 6 2010, 03:57:42 UTC

...poor, poor Optimus.

beckyh2112 January 6 2010, 04:25:47 UTC

Yeah, Optimus is in for an emotional gut-punch when he sees his boys again.

tv_the_sue January 6 2010, 04:19:19 UTC

Who/What is their "Lord" I must wonder.

So, are these fully AU Aerialbots, or are these good-Aerialbots-Turned-Evil be some force?

A very creepy, yet entrancing story.

beckyh2112 January 6 2010, 04:25:27 UTC

Unicron has green optics. ^_^

Which should answer your other question.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

tv_the_sue January 6 2010, 04:27:21 UTC

Ahhh, I see, and yes it does answer my question.

Prime is fucked, and not the good kind of fucked either.