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For spyridona beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 03:41:43 UTC
This is probably OOC and self-indulgent and rambly. I don't care.

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Ursa- His mother, Pana corrects himself, she is his mother, she is- (Not his mother, his mother is Water Tribe and the Hope of the South and kind and sweet and terrible ( ... )

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Re: For spyridona spyridona January 4 2010, 23:24:04 UTC
I love the subconscious confusion and dissociation Pana has about his mother (who becomes more and more alien to him) and the attraction he has to another 'steambaby'. And of all steambabies, an Ozai steambaby. (Hakoda wrings his hands at night, Bato tells him to stop worrying, and Nityan teases Pana about 'Ol' Blue Eyes'.) I think this could fit right before he starts rebelling over his Water Tribe culture. (I *grinned* over the comment about hips. Pana loves hips.)

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Re: For spyridona beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 23:30:31 UTC
I figured you can't just tell someone you're his mother after he's spent his whole life being raised by someone else as his mother and have him accept that easily. Or even at all.

Am glad you like the attraction bit. Was worried since it was just a random thing in my head and no chance to ask you without spoiling the surprise. Ozai steambabies are pretty steambabies. <3 (Oh, Hakoda, let them get it out of their systems. Besides you don't even know if she's interested back. *ruffles Nityan*)

Hips are delish. <3

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For spyridona beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 03:42:02 UTC
You know what to blame for this.

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Kya wakes in warm darkness. The man next to her in bed is still asleep, breathing softly. She lies curled up as far away from him as the bed will let her, the blankets kicked off onto the floor. Only her hair protects her modesty, and she feels like she is baking even in her nakedness.

It is too hot in the Fire Nation.

She sits up, and the man in the bed shifts. She glances at him but he remains asleep. His fists are clenched, though, and she wonders what he's dreaming about.

She wonders if he ever dreams about the wife who left him. He must. She cannot understand him if he does not.

She does not think she understands Firelord Ozai even if he does.

The commander of the Southern Raiders delivered her to him at a gift to celebrate his coronation. A gift, an "exotic beauty", "untouched" by any man of the Fire Nation. Well. That was certainly true. Still true, for the Firelord has never touched her, not once ( ... )

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Re: For spyridona suzukiblu January 4 2010, 10:28:11 UTC
. . . *wants moar* >>

BEX WHY ARE YOU MAKING ME GREEDY WHEN YOU'RE BURNED OUT? DDD: THAT IS JUST NOT ON.

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Re: For spyridona beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 22:46:09 UTC
For some reason, this piece is insanely pleasing unto me. And if I knew what else to write with them, I so would.

*strokes Kya and Ozai*

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Re: For spyridona spyridona January 4 2010, 22:52:19 UTC
*copy and pastes on the woe of you burning out when you TAUNT.*

I like this take much better. Ozai has utterly no idea what to do with the pretty Water Tribe woman and she is just so... sweetly motherly and protective, even if he doesn't deserve it. Sees one little ounce of pain and her heart goes to him.

*nuzzles your Kya*

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For neldluva: Catching Fire beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 03:43:48 UTC
'There is a firebird haunting the land,' the peasants said to her father. How could they pay their due to their lord when the phoenix burned their crops and scorched the very stones of the earth ( ... )

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Re: For neldluva: Catching Fire blue_lacquer January 5 2010, 01:29:22 UTC
Very nice! It's good to see Mai in action, and that is one creepy phoenix. :)

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Re: For neldluva: Catching Fire beckyh2112 January 5 2010, 22:19:58 UTC
Thank you!

Mai in action remains awesome. Someday, I will get a picture of her with a kukri, since I keep giving her and Mao one. <3

Ozai is a very creepy phoenix.

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For banditjoeykuba beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 03:44:17 UTC
Stocking stuffer!

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Prince-General Iroh had a wife waiting at home, heavy with his first child. Right here and now, he had his favorite naval captain.

Of course, his favorite naval captain was trying to climb the cabin wall to get away from him. This was definitely putting a crimp in Iroh's womanizing. Manizing. Seduction.

"Captain Jeong Jeong," Iroh said firmly, hands on his hips. "Stop damaging your ship and get down here."

"You grabbed my ass!"

"That is no cause to be burning handholds in the wall like that."

Jeong Jeong hissed something that commoners probably shouldn't be saying to princes. Naturally, Iroh had stopped caring about that sort of thing three days after joining the Fire Nation military because soldiers not swearing seemed as impossible as the sun not rising.

"You have a very fine ass," Iroh pointed out.

Jeong Jeong spluttered.

Iroh sighed. "Please come down so we can properly enjoy the rest of the night."

"There will be no we enjoying anything tonight!"

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Re: For banditjoeykuba weirdlet January 4 2010, 04:30:46 UTC
*cracks up*

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Re: For banditjoeykuba beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 22:46:41 UTC
Thank you!

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Re: For banditjoeykuba avocado_love January 4 2010, 04:57:42 UTC
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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For crystaldrake beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 03:44:53 UTC
Stocking stuffer!

A little bit from during the War.

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The edge of the sword rested against Pakku's throat. The swordsman's wrist and swordhilt pinned Pakku's hand. Fingers darker than Pakku's own twined with his, preventing him from waterbending the man off of him.

The swordsman's skin was warm. Everyone was warm to Pakku, but the swordsman was moreso.

Of course, the swordsman was Fire Nation.

"You are handsome," the swordsman said, his thumb rubbing against Pakku's wrist. "Dangerous, too. You've given me new scars."

For some reason, the swordsman sounded pleased by that.

Pakku said nothing, ignored the way the soft touch of the swordsman tried to warm something within him. He was cold, he was ice, and frost whitened in the swordsman's hair.

The swordsman smiled and leaned forward. His sword bit into Pakku's throat as his kiss struck Pakku's mouth.

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Re: For crystaldrake crystaldrake January 4 2010, 16:57:25 UTC
This makes me love Piandao/Pakku even more. :)

Thank you.

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Re: For crystaldrake beckyh2112 January 4 2010, 22:48:36 UTC
You're welcome! I'm really glad you liked it, since this was the first time I ever tried writing the two of them together. <3

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