[Avatar Fic] Hairbrush

[beckyh2112]

Title: Hairbrush
Characters: Mai/Zuko
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1200+
Warnings: Spanking.
Summary: Mai needs to punish Zuko.
Author's Notes: My entry for atlaland's Smutfest '09. Won second place!

Comments

[derawr]

You know, I just recently got into atlaland, and read the entries a few days ago. I saw this and thought it might have been yours. Glad to see I was right.

Nice. I really like it. I especially love that it's Zuko that's getting punished. A lot of people always make the girl be the one...which gets kinda old and annoying.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah, if you're familiar with the writers on atlaland, the styles and subject choices are usually distinctive enough to pick out who wrote what a lot of the time. That's part of the fun to me.

I could never picture Mai as a submissive in any relationship, and it seems like something that would work well for Zuko. Especially when it's roleplay with someone he loves.

[angeka_kathman]

Me neither! There are some really lame Maiko lemons on fanfiction.net where Mai does things like... I dunno... let Zuko continue "lovemaking" after she told him, to stop 'cause it hurt. Yeah, right... XP
BTW: excellent job, Very enjoyable and creative.

[yukinoomoni]

This is something I would have never considered before for those two. And yet, it seems oddy...apt. Huh.

Awesome.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[lunatron]

Mmm, spanking!

These people still go through a lot of clothing.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you!

Yeah, they definitely do. Fortunately, they have estates and money, they can afford to go through a lot of clothing. Though the Seneschal may facepalm at them a lot.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Disturbingly?

[anonymous]

WOW
that was hot

[beckyh2112]

Thank you!