[Avatar Fic] Distraction

[beckyh2112]

Title: Distraction
Characters: Zuko/Song
Word Count: 2200+
Rating: NC-17
Summary: While pursuing the Avatar on his way to the North Pole, Zuko runs into a pretty Earth girl. Or, rather, he chases a pretty Earth girl because she's from the village where the Avatar was not two days before.
Author's Notes: This is for inuyatta on the unending writing meme of

Comments

[inuyatta]

Wow--I've never read a fic between S1!Zuko and Song. You write passion quite well, and I enjoyed the fact that Song's become the fanon!badass with needles in several fics now! XD

I appreciate the effort you put into this, it means a lot! ♥

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

The needle-thing? That was dark_puck's invention. She happily infected the rest of us.

[inuyatta]

Ｓｈｅ　ｉｓ　ａ　ｂｏｏｎ　ｔｏ　ｔｈｅ　ｆａｎｄｏｍ，　ｉｎｄｅｅｄ．　；Ｄ

[dark_puck]

Bex can't see your font - why'd you type in MS Mincho? - so I'm repeating it here for her. :D

inuyatta: She is a boon to the fandom, indeed. ;D

[neldluva]

Oooh, yes. <3 That was beautiful. Even Zuko's fumbling was pretty cute. I liked how Song kept almost going for her needles, and then backing off because it actually felt pretty good. And yes, I snorfled when Zuko remembered Uncle's words of advice regarding girls and their orgasms. Sex ed by Uncle Iroh, that must have been a treat.

Lovely work, as always. <3

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I'd love to hear what sex ed by Uncle Iroh consists of. It's definitely something I couldn't handle writing. *grins*

For some reason lately, I've been enjoying writing sex where one of the partners isn't that engaged by the intercourse itself.

[lunatron]

Interesting continuity with your other story.

[beckyh2112]

What other story?

[lunatron]

The one where Iroh makes sure the girl gets off.

[dark_puck]

I'm pretty sure Iroh knows (or maybe even is responsible for) the Avatarverse version of it.

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

See Pux's comment for that. ^_~

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and glad I may have made a convert. Is a fun pairing. ^_^