[Transformers] Primary Colors

[beckyh2112]

Reminder: Transformers toy sales post.

Title: Primary Colors
Characters: Tracks/Sunstreaker, Prowl, Sideswipe, Blaster, Air Raid, Smokescreen, assorted others
Word Count: 3600+
Rating: R
Summary: Tracks isn't as pretty as Sunstreaker. The Lamborghini still can't stop thinking about the Corvette.
Author's Notes: This was written for jigsaws231, the winner of

Comments

[butterbean137]

Positively delicious. 8D Not even the fact that the last half was in accidental italics could distract me from the YUM. And Tracks's snark at the end was the perfect cherry on top. XD

[beckyh2112]

Accidental italics? Aw, crap. *goes to fix* Actual real comment-response to come sometime later, but thank you for letting me know. Teach me not to do a quick post-proof.

[butterbean137]

LOL, I have not yet posted something without being forced to go back a short while later and edit something. The lesson has not yet stuck with me.

[beckyh2112]

And now the real response!

Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. *grins*

Thank you again for pointing out the italics - I usually don't make those kinds of mistakes. So, of course, I didn't bother to check this time because, hey, not like I'd have made it this time, right? ;-)

I'm glad Tracks's snark at the end came across well rather than annoyingly smug. I was a bit worried. ^_^

[seeker_freefall]

Oh my. Now I want to know just what Sideswipe saw that made him say Sunny was kinky. :D

The last little exchange is such a tease - there _is_ going to be a sequal now, right? *sees -END- and sighs* Ah well, there was a tiny hope. Loved it though, especially Tracks' insistance that he would be the one on top, not Sunny. ^.^

...and that Sunny obviously thinks that Tracks' 'place' is literally under him - love it! Oh my, I pick up something new every time I re-read this. *saves to file*

(O.o Um, your italics kinda.. took over the second half of your fic.)

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

There is probably not going to be a sequel. Something I forgot to add into the header until later was that this was a prize for jigsaw231. I normally write Decepticons or Aerialbots, so I'm unlikely to do more of my own volition.

Sunstreaker's always come across as a very dominant personality to me, but I've never gotten the impression that Tracks is particularly submissive. ^_^ So I figured Sunny would default to "I'm on top", and Tracks would be all "bitch, please".

(Yeah, italics have been fixed. Oy. -_-;;)

[beckyh2112]

*headtilts* ... Yay?

[jigsaws231]

An awesome piece that I've enjoyed very much. I loved the inclusion of the other characters, especially Blaster and Air Raid. I'm particularly fond of the little kinks you give Tracks and Sunstreaker - very appropriate for each.

My apologies I haven't responded earlier. When I saw it posted I told life to take a back seat for a moment while I finally thanked you.

[beckyh2112]

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I was a bit worried when I didn't hear back from you.

Working in the other characters made me happy; I find it a little weird when romances take place in a vacuum. Especially with an organization like the Autobots, where they've got a lot of people in not a huge amount of space.

[laratron]

Wow, I really liked that. Thanks for sharing this for all to read and enjoy! I loved the exchange between Sunstreaker and Prowl at the beginning. Very in character. ^__^

[beckyh2112]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. That bit with Prowl was one of my favorite parts to write. ^_^