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charles_rb May 30 2009, 22:38:47 UTC
Azula VS Jet and a rebel killteam, Earth Kingdom, wave after wave of enemies.

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Part 1 beckyh2112 June 4 2009, 01:32:27 UTC
Smoke ( ... )

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Part 2 beckyh2112 June 4 2009, 01:32:42 UTC
They're the ones who are hunted now, and Jet finds this weirdly disorienting. Maybe it's just the burns twisting his body, and the bloodlust writhing at the edge of his mind.

He's hungryWhich is why Longshot has his bow angled against Jet's chest the way he does while they huddle in the thicket ( ... )

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Re: Part 2 charles_rb June 4 2009, 09:30:42 UTC
I asked for lots of violence - I got it! Yayyyy!

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Re: Part 2 dark_puck June 4 2009, 13:44:14 UTC
Lots and lots and LOTS of violence.

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Re: Part 2 beckyh2112 June 5 2009, 03:38:51 UTC
I am adding this here because I like it.

charlesrocketboy: Fast pace, tension, and I like Longshot having a "in case Jet goes mental" weapon around

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Re: Part 2 moonys_autumn July 26 2010, 15:18:13 UTC
And Jet pops into my head going "I'm not quite dead yet." X)
The vampire lore is really interesting, and I think you handled the violence and the dynamics between Jet's group very well.

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