Comments | beckyh2112: [TF: Ani Fic] Conduct Unbecoming

beckyh2112

[TF: Ani Fic] Conduct Unbecoming

Jan 29, 2008 18:47

Title: Conduct Unbecoming
Characters: Beta, Ultra Magnus
Word Count: 1026
Rating: PG
Summary: Ultra Magnus disciplines one of his Academy trainers for an affair with a student of hers.

( Conduct Unbecoming )

writing, series: transformers animated, character: female autobots

Comments 26

ladyrhiannon873 January 30 2008, 14:27:23 UTC

Really interesting way to reveal the relationship between Elita and Optimums.Great work.

beckyh2112 January 30 2008, 17:08:24 UTC

I'm glad you liked!

I'm thinking of writing a fic that would take place before this story about their actual affair, but that will probably come after I polish off some G1 stories first.

ladyrazorsharp January 30 2008, 15:13:39 UTC

I missed the first episode of TF:A, but I heard that Optimus either nearly or did indeed get himself drummed out of the academy...interesting take on exactly why. I liked seeing Optimus as younger than Elita, she his "Mrs. Robinson," if you will. Nicely done.

beckyh2112 January 30 2008, 17:36:16 UTC

It's heavily implied that he got drummed out in the episode, but I don't think it's actually stated unless you check his tech spec.

I've been hearing the "Mrs. Robinson" comparison a lot since I started talking about this idea. Maybe I ought to watch that movie.

Glad you liked it!

apathocles January 30 2008, 17:22:29 UTC

This is a totally awesome twist on the G1 dynamics, and it fits so damned well into Chinsverse. I approve!

I also approve of the Kup design you linked to, although I am a little worried about the relatively sane dimensions of his chin. :D

('In my day, we didn't need no slaggin' fancy chins....')

beckyh2112 January 30 2008, 17:44:14 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

oasis_pink_peng January 30 2008, 17:35:52 UTC

This RULED! Go Elita!

beckyh2112 January 30 2008, 17:44:57 UTC

^___^ I'm glad you liked it!

Elita One was way fun to write. Am planning to do another fic with her where I actually, oh, describe what she looks like.

saltedpin January 31 2008, 23:11:56 UTC

*pops in from apathocles' journal* Wow -- that was great, and I love the take on how Optimus got himself kicked out of the academy. I love the way you've characterised Elita, too :) Thanks for the read!

beckyh2112 February 1 2008, 22:06:13 UTC

You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it!

Elita was fun to write. Someday, in a future fic, she will get to pull out her guns. ^__^