Over_Look: Cliffjumper Fic #1

[beckyh2112]

Because Blitzwing and Astrotrain aren't talking to me.

Title: Back-to-Back
Fandom: G1 Transformers
Characters: Cliffjumper, Bumblebee
Rating: PG-13
Summary: On the battlefield, it was always good to have someone watch your back.

Comments

[sapphirebreeze]

Ah, nice. I rather like this.

[beckyh2112]

*flutters and preens and squees!*

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[dunmurderin]

As I said on AIM, I like it. You write Bumblebee as being not a combatjockey without making him twee or cute. You write Cliffjumper as a total combatjocky wtihout making him psychotic.

With the addition, that I like the way you handle the battle scene. And I thought it was interesting that the story takes place on Cybertron. And a nice bit with the glass gas.

Dun.

[missrao]

I like it. Dunno what else to say, it's short. Diito dunmurderin's comment.

[katsuko]

This was fantastic! Thanks for directing me to it ♥