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Dec 27, 2010 16:46

Title: Officer Down!
Author: Becky_H
Characters: Hotch-centric. Morgan, Reid.
Genre: Gen, H/c.
Rating: R
Word Count: 2,000
Warnings: Violence and gore. Ambiguous ending.
Summary: Shots fired, officer down.
Author’s Notes: This was my Christmas present to myself. Unapologetic sadism toward fake people and Hotch-Reid Hurt/Comfort.
( Being shot is more about surprise than pain, at least at first. It’s a hard, precise shove that knocks you back or sideways or down. Even if you’re in the middle of a shoot-out, dodging bullets, it’s always unexpected and shocking. )

fic, criminal minds

Comments 46

lady529 December 28 2010, 00:46:47 UTC

I really like this, it's very descriptive, but not overly so, just the perfect amount to give it a very real feeling.

I'm off to see what else you've written other than this and the coda for In Heat : )

The Lady 529

becky_writing December 28 2010, 00:49:09 UTC

Thank you! Just be warned that a lot of the writing there is a 'meme response' and unbeated stuff. There are a few more 'proper' fics in there (Stand, Beyond Fear, Unspoken, and Flip) are the others that got beta'd to reasonableness.

_medley_ December 28 2010, 02:14:21 UTC

Feel free to be self-indulgent ANY TIME. Really. (And I'm fine with you ending it there because I can assume they got him out of there and he was eventually fine lalalaIcan'thearyou.)

becky_writing December 28 2010, 02:14:51 UTC

HE WAS FINE! (and thank you!)

68luvcarter December 28 2010, 03:24:29 UTC

Excellent, would love for to know he made it but great ending and great story.

becky_writing December 28 2010, 03:24:59 UTC

Thank you!

writerjc December 28 2010, 03:34:38 UTC

darn it! NOOO!! I need more. I need you to fix my Hotch right now!! :) Seriously, fabulous job with this. Very well written, realistic and with pitch perfect characterisations. I really need for your chapters to cooperate so that I can have more ... please :)

becky_writing December 28 2010, 10:56:12 UTC

*laughs* Thank you! I'll see what I can do about fixing him now that I've broken him. I LOVE that I got the characterization right for you, too - so extra thanks for that.

michelel72 December 28 2010, 05:29:17 UTC

I'm not sure whether I love better the competent caring or the all-too-rare realistic effects of being shot. Well done.

becky_writing December 28 2010, 11:08:27 UTC

THANK YOU! The care's awesome but of course I'm gleeful that it felt realistic to you.