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Dec 22, 2010 12:12

Title: Power-Imbalance
Author: Becky_H
Character: Hotch/Reid
Rating: R
Word Count: 200
Prompter/Prompt: Raynedanser
"Your mind won't let you say that you want me.”
( In the whole course of human history, Reid is willing to bet there has never been an individual as bull-headedly stubborn as Hotch. )

writing meme, short-short, meme response, slash, criminal minds

Comments 8

yoritomo_reiko December 22 2010, 17:37:25 UTC

Okay, I laughed. It's very, very spot on for Reid and his stream of consciousness.

One note, I'm pretty sure you want conscience in the last line. Only thing that jarred for me, though I knew what you meant.

becky_writing December 22 2010, 17:38:13 UTC

OH, I hate when I do that. Thank you!

yoritomo_reiko December 22 2010, 17:53:48 UTC

Yeah, I do the same thing myself. :) No worries!

raynedanser December 22 2010, 22:22:12 UTC

OH MY GOD - I love you.

becky_writing December 22 2010, 22:27:31 UTC

I can see Reid doing that. I just. I can. (Thank you!)

raynedanser December 22 2010, 22:30:39 UTC

Oh so can I!!!

spiderweb_wine December 23 2010, 08:45:11 UTC

Oooh, that's pretty. I like it.

becky_writing December 23 2010, 14:06:12 UTC

Thanks!