Worst Case Scenario: Jack/Yana, R

[becky_writing]

Title: Worst Case Scenario
Author: Becky_H
Character(s): Professor Yana/Jack
Genre: Slash
Rating: R, I guess. Non-explicit sex.
Spoilers Utopia through LotTL
Warnings: Non-explicit sex.
Word Count: 550ish
Prompt: Set2Music Prompt 22: Your crusade's a disguise
Summary: What's worse than the end of the universe?
Author's Notes: Follows Redux. Requested

Comments

[mad_jaks]

It's the huge contrast you paint in the middle between the lover Yana is and the creature (if you like) the Master will be. The question of whether the sex passage is arousing or not doesn't come into it that's not what it's there for.

This comment has been brought to you by someone who may well have been influenced by previous discussions in other journals.

[becky_writing]

Bwahaha. Yes, that's exactly it. It's meant to be part of his personality and I could have written the whole thing, but even then it would have been about that half-dozen words, so eh. *lazy* and and and. I like that conversation and that kind of analysis so much, so thank you for making me happy with it!

[becky_writing]

*laughs* Thanks! (It's okay! You get the point across - and I get a big ego boost.)

[jadesfire]

[catching up on reading - apologies for spamming you with comments over the next hour or so...]

Oh wow. The shifts in this are so right - from wanting to kill him to deciding on distraction, and the final "It stops being a game" is spot on. Brilliant.

[becky_writing]

(No problem at all - it was really pleasant to come on-line to.)

This thing has been just a complete blast to play with - I'm really glad it was fun to read, too.