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May 14, 2007 12:31

Title: He Lived
Author: becky_H
Character: Jack
Rating: PG
Spoilers: No
Warning: None
Summary: He lived
Author's Notes: 150 word drabble, companion piece to He Died

( Across a thousand worlds and a million years, on silver sand and beneath golden skies, he lived )

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becky_writing May 14 2007, 18:55:48 UTC

Thank you - again!

unfeathered May 14 2007, 21:58:21 UTC

This is beautiful. I think I'm one of those who does need the 'feel better' piece!

For some reason, I especially like "He changed his ship and his name but never his rank". Good ol' quirky Jack.

becky_writing May 14 2007, 22:00:06 UTC

Me too! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I've got this pet theory, that's not really a theory but more an... idea? Insertion into "my personal canon of Jack" that says his name may be fake but he really was a Captain. Of something. Somewhere, somewhen. It IS quirky, and I can totally see Jack clinging to that.

jadesfire May 15 2007, 10:56:53 UTC

He fought like a wildcat and he ran like hell.
I love this as a description of Jack and his life. Kind of happier than the other, but just as strong and resonating. Great stuff.

becky_writing May 15 2007, 11:01:21 UTC

Thank you!

rachel68620 May 15 2007, 17:20:41 UTC

This is just as brillant and vivid as the companion piece. Great Job.

becky_writing May 15 2007, 19:27:26 UTC

Thank you!

ubixtiz May 16 2007, 06:04:03 UTC

This is very shiny, and comforting, after "He Died," in its vitality. There's a nice contrast between the bleak starkness there and the feeling of energy and motion given here.

becky_writing May 16 2007, 06:07:04 UTC

Jack is honestly one of the most alive characters I think I've ever seen, even in Torchwood.

Thank you.

ubixtiz May 16 2007, 18:26:17 UTC

Beautiful piece
Great inspriation for a poem
Will credit
Great job :D