"Aftermath" 1/1, Rated NC-17

[taraljc]

Author: taraljc
Title: Aftermath
Pairing: Becker/Jess
Rating: NC-17
Summary: From the "Just Kiss Her Already" prompt by morrigans_eve "Sex in the armoury". Mild spoilers for series 4&5.

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Comments

[seren_ccd]

Hnnnnghmmmf.

I am a puddle of ~feelings~ right now. This was sexy, raw, exciting, sensitive and so wonderfully in character. *sighs* So many lines that were so fabulously evocative and sensual. Love it so very much.

[taraljc]

I was being SO GOOD and not going to the NC-17 place with them just yet butplanning on building up to it, and then BAM. I just had to write a quickie. But I really wanted to get inside their heads, while Jess was getting into his pants. And I'm so glad that came across.

[taraljc]

Hurrah! I realised about partway through that erm... it doesn't quite make sense that Becker is changing in the armoury. But then, it didn't in the episode where he did anyway, so GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME.

[taraljc]

YAY FANSERVICE YAY

[taraljc]

I am still working on a story set between 5.05 and 5.06, so more is coming! But this was me jumping ahead in my personal Becker/Jess timeline a bit!

[torigates]

This is amazing and hot. I love it!

[taraljc]

Ta! I used to be one of those folks who only ever wrote "fade to black" sort of love scenes. And then the last few years, kinkmeme fills became a major joy of mine and suddenly I am porny all over. But I wanted to bring some characterisation along with the heat, because, well... I tend to do that.

[ruby_caspar]

This was amazing - so hot but so powerful and angsty at the same time. Absolutely amazing, I loved it.

[taraljc]

I really like the idea of Becker being the one who is hesitant despite the fact that he initiated it, but Jess sort of topping from the bottom as it were...