Fic: Queinte Rory (Gilmore Girls, Dean, Rory/Dean, NC-17)

[beckaandzac]

So, I've just now upgraded this from a WiP to a "thing I am too lazy to get betaed and like enough to post anyway." Let's hope I don't regret it. Please to be pointing out any egregious errors!

Title: Queinte Rory
Fandom: Gilmore Girls
Pairing: Dean-centric Dean/Rory
Rating: NC-17
Summary: the Dean-PoV companion to Hende Dean. Schmoopy wank-fic. "

Comments

[oxoniensis]

♥

I just love how torn up he is between nice and the other sort of nice. And how tuned into her he is, how absorbed in her. And I adore the fact that it's imagining her laughing that makes him come.

Gorgeous!

[beckaandzac]

Thank you! I've been rewatching s1 and just the way Dean looks at her makes me fall apart. His devotion is amazing.

[untitleddemo]

Okay, I know I'm probably not supposed to 'aww' over porn, but. Seriously, Becka, aww. AWW! This is so sweet and just right. <3

[beckaandzac]

If there's any porn that's supposed to be aww'ed over, this is it. I'm so glad you liked it. I LOVE THIS PAIRING SO MUCH.

[zooey_glass04]

Oh, I adore this. I love the tension between his idea of being 'a nice boy' and the niceness of what he wants to do with Rory. The description of their relationship is also delicious - the way he's so in love with all her little quirks, and the fact that imagining her lauging makes him come. I also really liked him imagining her telling him what to do to please her, and the idea that they would explore together.

Beautiful, thank you very much!

[beckaandzac]

I imagine their relationship as always being about the details. I mean, he spends so much time noticing things about her in canon, and I'm sure he would bring that home with him.

Thank YOU!

[femmenerd]

Oh Becka! This is my favorite flavor: sweet yet dirty, dirty and sweet. How earnest he is, curious. And yet, earthy. [srsly, tasting his own come!!] How he's always thinking about her *as a person* even as he thinks about her sexually. <3

[beckaandzac]

Those are all the things that make him my FAVORITE TV BOYFRIEND EVER. He's this combination of really thoughtful and confused and teenagery, and it continually amazes me.

[sothereyougo]

Hi again. I just posted a late comment *gets shifty eyes and tries to play it off* on your Rory POV companion fic to this, "Hende Dean." The two fics mirror each other beautifully.

Love the idea that his Dad taught him basic sexual politics but couldn't prepare Dean for how painfully hard his dick would get difficult it would be to hold back:

His dad gave him The Talk when he was twelve: be respectful, use condoms, always listen when a girl says no. He wants to be a nice guy, but Rory sometimes makes it hard to remember how.

Completely agree with femmenerd’s comment *yeah what she said* and that it is so Dean not to buy into the whole “Madonna/whore” bullshit false dichotomy. The structure of the fic embodies how he loves Rory for being a multi-faceted real-live-girl-human-person, how it adds to her mystery and charm and that he actually hopes that she is a sexual being:

He’s never asked if she does this too (he never would). And he doesn’t know with girls, what’s normal, and Rory’s far from normal anyway. But he hopes she

[beckaandzac]

Every comment I ever post is LATE.

Thank you so much for leaving such detailed feedback here. We know so little about things like Dean's relationship with his parents that it was interesting to imagine how that moment would go. And I love the way he loves Rory in canon because it is so complicated and multi-faceted.

I think perving on wee!Jared has been my whole life of late. And GOD, his HANDS.