BSG Fic - Transparency

[becisvolatile]

Title: Transparency
Authors: volatile/becisvolatile
Rating: R
Spoilers: Through to Unfinished Business
Characters: Kara/Lee
Genre: Angst, pr0n.
Word Count: 600+
Summary: She’s the only person he knows who wears shades in space. Lee knows that the slick aviators cover a multitude of sins.
Disclaimer: Not my sandpit.
Notes: My contribution to wisteria_’s Porn Battle, uses the

Comments

[boom_queen]

Holy shit Bec!!!!!!

That was just a million kinds of GUHHHHHHHHH. Oh the infidelicious angst!

And the glasses-as-barrier imagery was gorgeous and well done. Made me all shivery.

[becisvolatile]

infidelicious

Frak! That is like the BEST word ever!!!

Glad you got a kick out of it.

[callmeonetrack]

That was really powerful. I love the hates the shades/needs the shades dicotomy. And this bit was my favorite:
"She’s done this before. Looked at him like that, like he was actually the god that he was named for."

[becisvolatile]

Glad you liked the catch, thanks for reading it!

[angylinni]

ouchie, gah that was painful and raw.

nicely done sweets.

[becisvolatile]

*snuggles*

Psst.

Guess what I might be emailing you?

[angylinni]

does it involve an epic tale of star crossed lovers and fucked up angstyness?

*snuggles you back & gropes for good measure*

[becisvolatile]

Why yes, yes it does. I nearly died last week when I sat down to write and it just sort of ... rushed out.

[spydancer]

It has been a while but I still love your writing... It is new to me but I love how you write Kara/Lee. They strip each other so raw - it always hurts a little. Funny how the painful addictions are always the best. I agree with taragel about the line where she is 'looking at him like that, like he is actually the god he was named for,' How true this is! I always stop and rewind and watch Katee Sackhoff deliver those looks... I know these are not the happy ending sort, however, it would be nice, really nice, if he would just rip her clothes off everytime she looks at him like that!

[becisvolatile]

It feels like forever since I've written these two, and prison break? Wow, like... a year? More? Less?

I love Katee's "little girl lost" looks, you totally know she has him by the 'nads when she looks at him like that.

[ez_as_pi]

Oh pilots... must you be so screwed up? They can't help it can they? *sighs*

I love the lack of dialog right til the end... they don't need a lot of words.

[becisvolatile]

No, they can't help it.

And I find that Kara opening her mouth = apocalypse.

[ez_as_pi]

And I find that Kara opening her mouth = apocalypse.

ROTF....