Comments | becisvolatile: Summer Shiny Exchange 2007: for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/berkie">berkie</a></strong> by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/becisvolatile">becisvolatile</a></strong>

becisvolatile

Summer Shiny Exchange 2007: for berkie by becisvolatile

Sep 05, 2007 13:53

Title: Mud
Author: becisvolatile
Part: 1/1
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Lee/Kara
Word Count: 1900+
Category: One Shot
Genre: Angst, PWP
Archiving: The Fallout Shelter, Apollo/Starbuck Fan Fic, Beyond Insane all others please ask
Warnings: Sexual content
Spoilers: Up to and including S3, but not really.
Summary: They just want the Gods to turn their ( Read more... )

lee/kara, fic, bsg

Comments 20

spiderwebb September 5 2007, 21:03:46 UTC

That? What you wrote up there? Was so good! I like it when my pilots play in the mud. =)

I really liked all the descriptive elements, also. I could feel the raindrops and the mud and the grit and the aches. Very well done.

becisvolatile September 6 2007, 00:34:56 UTC

I like it when my pilots play in the mud.

I know, right? They make getting dirty lookd like clean old-fashioned fun.

Or not.

Thanks for the comment.

berkie September 6 2007, 00:32:23 UTC

I don't often comment to fic b/c I rarely know what to say. If this wasn't for me, I probley wouldn't be taking the time to type this comment right now.

And please understand that it's b/c I'm speechless, b/c that? Was perfect. That's our pilots, frakked up as they may be.

You are an awesome awesome writer and I am so lucky to have received this little gem. Thank you!!

becisvolatile September 6 2007, 00:37:13 UTC

Yay! So glad you liked it! There would be no small amount of suck if I'd written it for you and you didn't like it.

When I emailed you and you said "angst" I was a bit, you know, inclined to roll my eyes because smut and angst for me? That's like putting a fish in water and saying "swim".

Glad you liked and glad you took the time to let me know.

berkie September 6 2007, 01:33:55 UTC

When I emailed you and you said "angst" I was a bit, you know, inclined to roll my eyes because smut and angst for me? That's like putting a fish in water and saying "swim".

So you're saying I made it easy for you? ;)

Thanks again. :)

wickedgillie September 6 2007, 13:35:59 UTC

This was nothing short of impressive. The cold, the damp, the mud; it all felt very palpable. You get an extreme A+ for atmospheric excellence!

arielmoondance September 6 2007, 15:53:01 UTC

The L&K shippers on skiffy were discussing how TPTB would leave our pilots. I can say that this would be fine for me!

Great dialogue and smut!

Thank you!

ammonite7 September 6 2007, 16:29:08 UTC

Aaaaaah. All so very right. Cold wet striking them, blood, mud and no fluff because that's the way they are.