BSG Fic: The Body is a Myth (1/3)

Jan 11, 2009 17:02

So, this is that thing I was talking about. It's enormous and therefore in multiple posts. It's also finished. The first 2,700 words were originally posted in this post, although they are also reposted here as there have been some minor edits to that section. And I want it all in one place. As you can see, I started this over seven months ago ( Read more... )

bsg, omg i finished something!, the body is a myth, final five, writing, battlestar galactica, fic

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rose_griffes January 16 2009, 01:35:51 UTC
I'm re-reading, one section at a time.

There were seconds and seconds of silence. Laura felt herself smile: she knew the exact look that would be on his face. Personal betrayal that the universe dare throw this trick at him. At him.

Hah. For Bill it's always about him, isn't it.

Caprica hid in the forest.
*meep* Frankly I'm amazed at how much sympathy I've developed for her. I certainly didn't feel that way in the begining. At any rate, this idea is awesome.

“Well the good news is, your blood work matches the samples I took before you died, minus any signs of cancer,” Cottle said. “The bad news is, you died, and to be honest, young lady, that's not a symptom I can easily reconcile with your being here right now.”

Heeeeee! Cottle--so blunt and so funny.

Love it that Kara went into her viper for comfort. Also, head!Leoben, yay!

Kara's dream about ghosts watching her from the balcony... cool.

Tory had worked that one out early, perhaps even on New Caprica; never cross the Sixes. Tory was used to them by now. That fifty- ( ... )

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beccatoria January 17 2009, 15:40:37 UTC
Wow, what awesome feedback! Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know the parts that you liked. I really appreciate this ( ... )

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korenap December 6 2010, 02:59:58 UTC
I just got a rec for this fic. I'm really enjoying it. I love your writing style and the way your handling of all the characters. I already know I'm going to like this version of seaon4 so much better than canon. I like the way you wove all the mystical parts into this so well and so quickly. They feel real and purposeful.

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