Comments | becca_lavender: Title: Closure Chapter 4/4 Rating: PG-13

becca_lavender

Title: Closure Chapter 4/4 Rating: PG-13

Aug 28, 2011 01:50

Comments 6

dulcedeusex August 28 2011, 09:33:36 UTC

What a satisfying ending to a wonderful fic! Loved the banter and the platonic sleepover, then the sexy breakfast. Dan "suggesting"... My fave line was if it's a plan it means I don't want your input. Then him going with Nate... Barcelona!!! This was a perfect ending. Great job! XxDulce

becca_lavender September 5 2011, 15:07:44 UTC

Thanks for reviewing! I'm happy you enjoyed the ending-I wanted them not to solve everything at once, but also show they're on the right track. Plus, I seem to have to put Nate in all my stories.

unomega August 28 2011, 17:05:53 UTC

Oh, that was wonderful :) I loved how they got together after all that time (I'm a sucker for the burning love scenario), even though I am a bit sad that Louis got hurt (I always feel bad for the little guy) and I am so glad Chuck is not in this! 'Twas a wonderful read, that I am sure, I will reread!

becca_lavender September 5 2011, 15:11:29 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't worry about Louis-he's a handsome prince. He'll be fine. :)

LOL re: Chuck. I so strongly dislike Chuck that it's hard for me to even acknowledge him, and I felt like setting this in the future helped to separate Blair from Chuck some. I think some time and distance would help Blair finally heal.

slayerboy2009 August 29 2011, 03:56:46 UTC

I kinda feel cheated I must be honest here I was expecting a happily ever after. Of course I get the see you later bud that I love. Of course i am bias and i been begging for smut all this fanfic. So dont mind me. :) I however do feel satisfied wtih the end and can honestly say you are wonderful and your story is clearly one that brings me happyness. yay you! For you Epic WIN at DAIR fanfic!

becca_lavender September 5 2011, 15:14:49 UTC

LOL, sorry to disappoint. I wanted to leave them in a good place, but I didn't want all their problems to magically be solved just because of a catalyst like Dan's accident.
As far as smut, I figure whatever you can imagine happened in that bedroom is more satisfying than whatever I would write. Plus, let's give these kids a little privacy. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it.