blame it on the cocktails (jim/jan) pg13

Mar 09, 2008 11:56


Title: Blame It On the Cocktails 
Fandom: The Office
Pairing/Characters: Jan/Jim
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 250
Summary: Post-The Convention. Jim finds some similarities in his situation with Jan's.
Author's Notes: The prompt was for second best at nobodysbizathon

Jim knows in the morning he’ll blame it on the appletinis. But really it’s more complicated ( Read more... )

office fic: pairing: jan/jim, challenge: nobodysbizathon, !fic: all fandoms, office fic: character: jim, office fic: character: jan

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allibabab March 9 2008, 17:50:47 UTC
only after the suit jacket unbuttons and the mascara smears
it’s all drowned together in this cocktail of neon green liquor and everything comes in waves towards him and now he’s standing here with his hand up her shirt and hers down his pants and somewhere he thinks this is wrong

love this! there's just this feeling, this sense of being, that they share, and you hit that right on the head with that last line. wonderful job, too, with acknowledging that even they know that what they're doing is somewhat wrong or at least is happening for the wrong reasons. you got a lot in here with feelings and characterizations and reasoning, and it's only 250 words! nicely done.

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allibabab March 9 2008, 17:51:38 UTC
whoops! apparently i suck at italics. my bad.

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bebitched March 15 2008, 19:51:48 UTC
Thank you so much! Drabbles are so difficult for exactly that reason and it's really nice to hear that I'm doing something right!

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