your teeth are black with wine as you place those lips on mine (claire/alex) r

[bebitched]

title: your teeth are black with wine as you place those lips on mine
fandom: lost
character(s)/pairing(s): claire/alex
rating: r
word count: 235
prompt: argon for femslash100's periodic table challenge (progress 21/30)
spoilers: general s4
author's note: title from franz ferdinand's "evil and a heathen"

summary: cheap red wine, lost innocence,

Comments

[missy_useless]

This is perfect. So eerie and haunting and beautifully written. Love the pairing, love the atmosphere, love the flow. Thank you for sharing this. Wonderful work.

[bebitched]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[slybrunette]

This is lovely! It's sad and angsty and pretty much perfect :)

[bebitched]

Thank you! And hey: almost-icon twins!

[phelipa]

Another fabulous femslash pairing from you!! I love the hints that they're dead but that neither of them admit it to the other. The part about ibuprofen never healing a bullet wound was awesome. Amazingly written (as always!) and I always enjoy your new pairings :D

[bebitched]

Thank you so much! When I started this challenge I decided I wasn't going to repeat any pairings, which is difficult at times but also really fun :D I'm glad you're enjoying them :D

[girlinasmock]

These two together are so beautiful, it twists something in my ribcage a little.

I especially like the lines about the dripping lamp and Claire's not-crying baby; very nicely done.

[bebitched]

Thank you!

[pure_ecstasy6]

A great little fic, if a little eery.. lol=)