even land-locked lovers yearn for the sea (kate/penny) pg13

Aug 19, 2009 17:27


title: even land-locked lovers yearn for the sea
fandom: lost
character(s)/pairing(s): kate/penny
rating: pg13
word count: 205
prompt: vanadium for femslash100's periodic table challenge (progress 16/30)
spoilers: post-s4
author's note: title from death cab's "brothers on a hotel bed"

summary: kate has a midnight visitor on the rescue boat. 
You dream about rabbit holes. About maps that shift at will and equators that bunch and wiggle off the page. )

lost fic: character: kate, challenge: periodic table, lost fic: pairing: kate/penny, !fic: all fandoms, lost fic: character: penny, !fic: lost

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phelipa August 19 2009, 22:20:26 UTC
Is it coincidence that I reread Explosions this morning and was craving more fic from you? I think not :)

Fabulous - I absolutely adore your Lost Femslash. The taste of the water really struck me - very realistic and a great description! I never really thought of this pairing but enjoyed reading. Great job :)

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bebitched August 21 2009, 02:24:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I'll keep the femslash coming if you keep the wonderful reviews coming ;)

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phelipa August 23 2009, 02:51:58 UTC
It's a deal :)

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bast2 August 19 2009, 23:15:13 UTC
I have never watched Lost--have no idea who these characters are--but your tag line reeled me in, and I'm glad. Such a pleasure to read your style.

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bebitched August 21 2009, 02:25:35 UTC
Well I'm so glad you gave this a chance even though you'd never seen the show! Thanks for reviewing!

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mammothluv August 20 2009, 13:22:48 UTC
This is fantastic. I love your descriptions of Kate's dreams.

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bebitched August 21 2009, 02:25:55 UTC
Thank you!

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laffable August 21 2009, 01:05:51 UTC
I love it. The progression from hand to mouth to tongue. Intimate and lovely and stuff.
You wake up to moonlight waxing poetic across the sheets tangled around your legs,
That's my favorite line. Gorgeous. And kudos to you for pulling off second person.
Thanks for the read. :)

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bebitched August 21 2009, 02:26:38 UTC
Thank you so much! (I love writing in second person :D)

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pure_ecstasy6 January 21 2010, 14:50:33 UTC
Really great, but too short! lol =)

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