Communication [oneshot]

Jun 16, 2010 21:46

Title: Communication
Author: aibakawaii
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3554
Summary: Ohno takes the train to work every morning, and that's where he meets Nino. Their way of speaking is a little strange though...
A/N: Whoa I actually finished on time. Oh, but it isn't a birthday fic, I just wanted to do something for Neen's birthday ( Read more... )

*arashi, c : ninomiya kazunari, r : pg, g : fluff, #oneshot, p : nino/ohno, c : ohno satoshi, g : au

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amaskuponthesky June 17 2010, 02:09:09 UTC
Omgee it's so cute :D
asdkgjl this is genius :D

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aibakawaii June 17 2010, 15:56:51 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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tonieboo0013 June 17 2010, 02:25:14 UTC
This was so sweet! Just, your writing is so smooth, first off. No words seemed out of place, or misspelt, and the mood was constant throughout.

Your characters of Ohno and Nino, even though this is an AU, were reminiscent of what they're actually like (well, what their image is like) and yet you didn't overdo any common character trait; fishing and gaming.

I'm glad you were able to finish this in time for Nino's birthday! I'm also glad I found another good writer in the fandom ^^

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aibakawaii June 17 2010, 16:04:40 UTC
akhsfd, THANK YOU! *A* I really do try for the smoothness, so I'm really glad you think so. ♥♥

I think there's a LOT of things you can do with Ohmiya, but I never get tired of having Ohno and Nino stay in their appropriate character. ;3

A- A good writer? *gushes*

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aibakawaii June 17 2010, 16:05:15 UTC
Heh, shy Ohmiya is adorable, huh? x3

Thanks for reading! ♥

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livelovespeak37 June 17 2010, 02:32:22 UTC
i absolutely love this ♥ the idea was so cute.
as amazing as always :)

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aibakawaii June 17 2010, 16:34:22 UTC
Aw thank you~ ♥

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arashijun June 17 2010, 02:33:34 UTC
Aww that was cute.
I really liked it >.<
Mind if I do a remix sequal type thingy idk wtf its called but I want to do it. Lol

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aibakawaii June 17 2010, 16:36:05 UTC
Thanks! :D
*gasp* G-Go ahead! *o* I'd love to read it aha~ (because really, I enjoyed writing this fic but when I reread my stuff I can never feel anything. xD)

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arashijun June 18 2010, 03:58:27 UTC
Haha, I'll do it once I get outta school, because I started too but now I totally lost my idea. >.<
I'll get it though

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