The Missing Stair

Mar 23, 2014 22:04


The human body is composed of nearly 100 trillion cells. Each is specialized in function, intricately organized into the complicated structures that make up the essence of who we are: the pulsing blood, the beating heart, the neuron-packed grey matter of our brains. And within each cell, another world: the organelles and enzymes which serve to ( Read more... )

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similiesslip March 24 2014, 02:13:33 UTC
::hugs::

I know a little about how genes affect families.

I love how you wrote this. ::hugs::

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beautyofgrey March 24 2014, 03:07:04 UTC
Thank you, dear. And I know...*hugs* ♥

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sweeny_todd March 24 2014, 02:47:23 UTC
*sending you all the love*

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beautyofgrey March 24 2014, 03:07:46 UTC
*sending some back since we could all use it*

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veronica_rich March 24 2014, 04:52:59 UTC
I like the interspersal of the science and how it brings "stairs" into the writing in a way that makes sense. I imagine this would be hard to watch as a parent.

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beautyofgrey March 24 2014, 13:43:50 UTC
Thank you. And yes it is, although you do tend to adjust to a new way of "normal".

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kickthehobbit March 24 2014, 06:28:50 UTC
This is fantastic.

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beautyofgrey March 24 2014, 13:43:59 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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jexia March 24 2014, 08:11:38 UTC
Nice work. I used DNA as the stairs in my piece, too.

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beautyofgrey March 24 2014, 13:54:09 UTC
:D Great minds! DNA was the first (and really the only thing) that I could keep focused on when this topic came up.

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jexia March 24 2014, 18:02:50 UTC
Me too. It's HARD writing to a topic! But on the other hand, I'm writing things I would never otherwise write, so...

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