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beautybedamned

Random update.

Aug 20, 2005 11:20

This is reverting back to a place for all my original work and non-Po5-related work. For more info, check here.

These are pieces that I to finish. Stuff that I have to move on. Will try to get on them ASAP. Some are for wonderfuldays_, some are not.

( Because I love the train and how I can write in it. )

Comments 4

07091987 August 20 2005, 07:08:04 UTC

1st: There are just some people who can see beauty in the ordinary patterns of life that most people seem to hate. But then again its all a matter of perception ne?

2nd: Gives me a sense of nostalgia afterwards. I love the imagery of the blotches and petals. The way you make even the sense of touch very feel'able is nice. You exercise the senses.

3rd: Cyclical regrets...Viciousness. Har. This one made my headache a bit. But I got over it... Nature is... *_*

4th: Haha! This is so true! Well at least during phone calls the person doesnt know you're nervous, trembling or so...advantage! But yes, it does get boring eventually: sure, kay, hmm... Short, meaningful and punches right through. *POW*

Overall: Lyrical, reminds me of poetry.

coffeebased August 20 2005, 16:11:27 UTC

SHISHIDO! i know he's the last one!

mlina August 20 2005, 16:13:46 UTC

XD You were there when Bunbun commented that it ought to be him. Guh. Heheheh... will finish it sometime after Wednesday. On that same day I will update like mad. >< I hate school.

Musings on the pieces le_chatnoir August 22 2005, 09:38:36 UTC

Re the first one: Sometimes what we see in a passing, fleeting moment, can encapsulate a lifetime of wisdom.

Re the second one: We all leave marks on the pages of people's lives. Sometimes, though, we don't see that until they're long gone, and all that's left is this ephemeral imprint, and a faint, lingering scent.

Re the third one: Chaos serves to change, to move. If Order is left in place, the one does not live life, but merely goes through the motions.

Re the fourth one: Phone calls are awkward because one can play a role, and the person on the other line will not know the difference. But I suppose that that's sort of like lying, and in a way, who really wants to lie?

*hums thoughtfully*

Sometimes I wonder what it is in your prose that pulls this much wisdom out of me...