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FanFic: BB The Silent One - Ch 4 Interacting

Dec 23, 2012 02:09

BB The Silent One
Chapter 4: Interacting

Pairing: Catherine/Vincent/Beast
Genre: Angst, Ship, Hurt/Comfort
Rating: Pg-13
Warning: Mental Mayhem
Spoiler Alert: Season 1 Ep 1-9

Summary: Beast wants nothing more than to see Catherine and for her to see him, but Vincent and JT are getting in the way. Catherine and Vincent finally talk to each other ( Read more... )

season: 1, creation: fanfic, rating: pg-13, pair: catherine/vincent, character: beast in vincent, character: catherine chandler, character: vincent keller, pair: catherine/vincent/beast, fic genre: angst, author: violetinstincts, fic genre: m/f, pair: catherine/beast

Comments 6

stanford_rawn December 23 2012, 10:10:30 UTC

I love how you write, is intense and beautifull.

Damn, I hope you post more soon.

Chapter 1: "Confusion. Panic. Fear. (...) Convulsions. Pain. Frustration. (...) Concentration. Perseverance. Fortitude." That was so beautifull.

Chapter 2: You described so perfectly the toughts and feelings of the Beast. And this: "It was the only thing Beast looked forward to in his existence.". Damn.

Chapter 3: "He wanted her to understand him. He wanted a connection." / "Catherine could be his equal. She could be his match." You are so good at writing about things like that.

Chapter 4: "The thundering of his emotions and thoughts dwindled till the only thing that existed was the connection their eyes shared." You explained every pain and desire from the Beast and Vincent, is amazing.

Your writing is perfect, Fae.

violetinstincts December 24 2012, 03:37:55 UTC

Thank you. I'm happy you like it so much. I don't know if my writing is as good as you view it, but thank you. I'm a little embarrassed ( ... )

Beast vs Vincent malaika2003 December 26 2012, 19:20:33 UTC

Still loving the story :)

I love how sometimes Beast wants the same as Vincent and other times there is a conflict. To be near Catherine, the beast is at the mercy of Vincent but there are things the beast does to nudge Vincent in Catherine's direction..love it!

More please.

Re: Beast vs Vincent violetinstincts December 27 2012, 06:38:24 UTC

:) I like adding that where sometimes they think the same and sometimes they think the opposite thing. I'm loving the tormented Beast angst right now. :)

charls28 February 14 2013, 10:04:59 UTC

This is a great story! I love that it's from the Beast's point of view and how you've made him a separate character. I can't wait to read more!

violetinstincts February 15 2013, 23:13:15 UTC

Thanks! :)

I am trying to finish up on my AU Cat as an attorney and Vincent is outed to the world vic The Camera first then I will get back to this one. Unless something happens and I have to write a chapter for this one. :)

The Plot Beasts bite and you have to write. OMG did I just rhyme that? *shakes head* I guess I did. LOL!!!

I'm happy you like it. :) Violet