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You & I Were Made For This - 1D: Harry/OFC; Harry/Louis - Chapter 1

Feb 09, 2011 21:48

Title: You & I Were Made For This
Author: Me, imagination55
Pairing: One Direction - Harry/OFC (minor); Louis/Harry (end game)
Chapter: 1
Rating (by chapter): PG-13
Summary: Sometimes what's in front of you is not what you should be looking for. - Harry is kidnapped whilst One Direction are in Brighton, recording music. With a first hand look at the seedy ( Read more... )

music: louis tomlinson/harry styles, fic: you and i were made for this, chaptered

Comments 18

ilikehumanflesh February 10 2011, 02:38:36 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad that you've published a new fic, Dani! And I know you were somewhat stuck for awhile but I promise you couldn't tell while reading this :)

I also loved the part with part with Freya. I actually like her. What is this, I liked guy/girl interaction?! I know it's not endgame, but I think you should take this as a compliment about the way you write!

Honestly, this whole thing intrigues me! I love everyone's dialogue and banter. They're all lovable <3

LOLing at Liam and "jogger jeans" by the way.

I love this and this is an amazing start! Also, now I'm gonna bug you nonstop for more. >:)

imagination55 February 10 2011, 10:50:02 UTC

Funnily enough, after I read your fic I decided to try and work out if I could somehow post a first chapter. I was stuck on what to include but that's shifted to Chapter 2 now, so hopefully I can getting on with the writing! :)

I am SO unbelievably glad that you didn't hate Freya. She's not exactly three dimensional, but I'm working on it. I can't believe I'm writing het again, however minor, but there is a purpose to it, heh.

Liam & his jogger jeans has captured everyone's imagination! I couldn't resist putting it in. Cheap laughs is my forte. :p

I'm glad you're gonna bug me tbh. I need it to keep me inspired/motivated! (Made another fandom wait a year for the last few chapters of a fic once :/)

Thank you for being so enthusiastic, chicka. ♥ You've made me smile this morning.

leneebear February 10 2011, 03:34:44 UTC

This is so great, I really love it. I love how descriptive it all is. It makes it all so much easier to picture.

I love the way all the boys interact, it's really adorable. Zayn and Harry complimenting Niall was sweet. I laughed at Liam ironing his boxers, haha!

I actually quite like Freya so far so this should be interesting. I love the little hints of Louis/Harry but noting serious yet, just generally being adorable bffs atm. <333

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

imagination55 February 10 2011, 10:57:50 UTC

I love how descriptive it all is.

That is music to my ears! Initially, it didn't start out so wordy, but I needed to get into it (especially the locations) to keep me interested in writing and hopefully create that picture. I didn't want the boys to live in a bland, nameless box.

I wanna get a lot of OT5 action in this so I'm glad the interaction is working. Dialogue can be a bitch to get right sometimes.

Yay another success with Freya! You don't know how relieved I am. :)

Thanks for reviewing, chicka. ♥ I needed this to settle my nerves, heheh.

icon!snap. ;)

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imagination55 February 10 2011, 11:06:19 UTC

I realise that interaction between the boys was huge in this chapter, with not a lot of plot happening yet, so I'm glad it's working already! :)

Ironing!Liam is a tiiiiny part of me. I do most of the ironing in my house to help my dad out and I used to be guilty of this lol.

Zayn doesn't come naturally to me so I have to work at him (sounds allsorts of dodgy :p), but I think I'm starting to feel more comfortable with my version. He's vain and competitive and really sassy. :'D

OMG Louis & Harry have a terrible case of UST and they don't even realise it yet. I've barely written them like this before so it's just as exciting for me, heheheh.

And what part will Freya play in this? Who's the old suspicious dude?

THOSE ARE THE MILLION POUND QUESTIONS! Not sure I know all the answers yet lol.

Thanks for reading, chicka. ♥ It feels so good to be writing and posting again. It's only been a month since my last fic and I've missed doing it! Don't think these boys are gonna be letting me go soon.

timetraveled February 10 2011, 12:32:02 UTC

I thought I'd be good and actually comment on one of your OD fics :3 So yeah, I actually liked Harry with Freya (I can't help but think of Merlin when I read that name XD) but obviously I'm looking forward to more Harry/Louis. I loved the bit with Harry putting his hand over Louis' on the hairdryer, so adorable! I should probably follow this comm so I don't miss any of your future fic so I'll do that now. ♥

imagination55 February 10 2011, 12:48:50 UTC

Aw, Cath! Lol, fandoms colliding. There's a tiny reason why I chose the name, but it'll probably become obvious in Chapter 2.

I'm sorta obsessed with them being tactile now so I try and get it in there as much as possible. Well, they give enough inspiration irl. :'D Plus, they've both got nice hands.

Glad you liked and thank you for commenting, chicka. Hope you're doing okay. ♥

colazitron February 10 2011, 15:32:03 UTC

I am very intrigued by this. I like the character interactions and that everyone seems like regular human beings - even Freya! O(F)Cs so often feel completely superfluous but you really made it work! I'm curious about where you're going to be taking this!

And nautical is always in. ;)

imagination55 February 10 2011, 16:26:09 UTC

Glad the interaction is sufficiently interesting enough because otherwise I'd be screwed. The actual plot is coming! lol.

Btw, I love the word superfluous. Not something I get to use much in my daily vocabulary, thankfully. ;) I try not to put too many OCs in one fic for that very reason though. It's probably the hardest thing to make three dimensional.

Thanks for commenting. :) I didn't expect that many because this is such an intro kind of chapter!