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Oct 18, 2009 04:04

Title: Fix Me Up
Author: beautiful_robot
Fandom: Glee
Pairing,Character(s): Finn, Puck, Kurt with a hint of Will/Finn and Puck/Kurt (friendship/flirtation/hatred)
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: None
Summary: Finn thinks he's going to spend the afternoon learning dance moves, sadly that isn't the case.
Disclaimer: Clearly I own nothing.
Fanfiction.net Link: here

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ship; will/finn, ship; puck/kurt, tv; glee

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r_chama October 19 2009, 04:49:12 UTC
OMG, this piece is totally awesome! I like how there are three conversations going on, and they're all very direct and funny. Puck is my favorite one in this piece. Does he always come inside to bother Kurt? Hmmm. :)

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beautiful_robot October 19 2009, 11:30:04 UTC
Thanks =)

Yeah in my head he always comes inside lol

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zephyrprince October 23 2009, 20:35:35 UTC
Really fun story. A couple of typos I caught if you're interested:

It should be "awe" instead of "aww" in the following two lines:

1. "Who the hell are these hot bitches anyway?" Puck said in aww as the five ladies began to rise above the stage. "That brunette is fine!"

2. "Those hot bitches are the greatest girl group ever." Kurt stated also in aww.

Also, "that gingers do" should be "that ginger's do," and "That blonds pretty fine too" should be "that blond's pretty fine too."

Otherwise, I loved it. Kurt would totally adore Girls Aloud!

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