Orange Collision

Jun 23, 2011 01:47



Title: Orange Collision

Pairings: John/Paul, George/Ringo   Equal time for both pairings
Rating: NC-17

Warnings: sexual situations, drug and alcohol use, language, distressing situations

Summary: En route to Los Angeles, a storm diverts the Beatles to an uncharted island in the middle of the Pacific. Finding themselves among the few survivors, ( Read more... )

george/ringo, rating: nc-17, john/paul

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samberrie June 25 2011, 03:43:24 UTC
I almost screamed of joy when I saw an update! But I didn't, cause my mom would've been like "da fuck?"

I, too, have been checking B!S everyday for an OC update, and it has arived! Huzzah! <3

I love this chapter since it's from Ringo's POV! I think he's my favorite POV to read when it comes to beatles slashies. :DD

Anywho, I'm flipping out about Mal, man! Goodness, thanks for giving me such a nice cliff to hang on to!
I'm not very adequate in the arm strength variety, but I won't let go, I promise. XD

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macca44552 June 26 2011, 21:07:11 UTC
Haha, wow! It's surreal to think that I've got people who check the website daily for a new update. :'D Thank you, and I'm sorry that the update was so late.

Alright, well I'll be sure to include more Ringo POVs, then. :D And, haha, I'll try to be kind to your arm and not have you hang on for too long. XD

<333333 Thank you!

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lennon_jok June 26 2011, 17:55:32 UTC
not to be rude, but can i assume mal's return will at last mean some plot-development? or character-development? relationship-development? please? i love this story, man, but its going round in circles a bit.

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macca44552 June 26 2011, 21:11:56 UTC
I'm sorry that you feel as though this story has been lacking in development (though I think we may disagree on what constitutes as development). The first half of the story had rapid plot development and such, but now the plot is going to come a little more slowly because I have to spend time developing the relationships and characters (which includes OC), and building up to events that happen later on. So the pace is going to slow down for a little while, which means more reflective chapters like the previous two. Yeah, so...sorry?

Thanks for the comment, though!

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GAERBBJGSAYAJHSD windywisp June 27 2011, 00:37:34 UTC
OK OK OK SO
I WAS ALL DGFDSHGF FOR DAYS COS LIVEJOURNAL KEPT ON BEING A WHORE AMD LOGGING ME OUT WHEN I CAME TO BEATLESSLASH
AND NOW
DDFDSGD
YOU UPDATED
YESSS
ok ok
omggg george and ringo ugh work shit out dghhfdg get on dr phil or something
you need each other jdfghjdhfg
He closed his eyes and sighed, rubbing his arms against the wind. Sometimes he wished that he could just uncap his head like a fucking jar and throw all the contents into the ocean. And then he would be empty, free. But he wasn’t stupid and he knew how things like that often worked out, so he had cleverly decided that he would keep his basic functioning abilities and his drumming talent in the jar. Ha.

... )

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sueme_sueyou June 27 2011, 02:38:08 UTC
All right, I'm merely a lurker but good god I love this story. I could go into detail but it's 4:30 AM and... MAL IS BACK!
I was so worried about him. Poor little gentle giant, lost all alone;-; If something's happened to him though ughughugh

Ok I'm sorry about the poor quality of this comment but um wonderfully fantastic story I hope Mal is okay and now I'm going to continue to lurk

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sundarlingxx June 27 2011, 22:18:11 UTC
Finally! I read this when you posted and didn't get a chance to comment because I've been so busy and now I can't remember if I had commented on it the other day or not so if I have please disregard this comment :D

Fabulous chapter as always :D. It was nice to see some George/Ringo. Even though I am a total John/Paul fan.

Can't wait for the next update! :D. Soon yes? Hehe

<3

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