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fic: Opinion

May 14, 2010 23:06

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grl_in_red May 16 2010, 05:49:27 UTC

Aw this was very sweet. And I'm absolutely sure this was what went on in John's head when he saw Paul in his glasses... Sad but cute. Paul is ridiculously adorable in those glasses. ^_^ I loved how you described Paul in John's opinion. xD

mittenlover May 16 2010, 06:52:01 UTC

Aw, thanks! I don't dwell in John's POV very often, so this was very new to me. :)

frambreliza May 16 2010, 15:59:01 UTC

Awww, John. :(

I loved this; especially the last sentence in this:

Paul looks at himself in the mirror and wrinkles his nose, painfully sweet. He finds small flaws on his face. John finds only one; it is too perfect.

mittenlover May 16 2010, 18:56:51 UTC

Thanks. :)

theastolat May 16 2010, 16:15:39 UTC

Aww this was sweet! John's gotta know he's a handsom devil though. lol.

mittenlover May 16 2010, 18:57:39 UTC

We all know he is. We should have sent him postcards telling him that. Too late now. :(

Thank you!

spirit414 May 19 2010, 23:23:48 UTC

Oh my FUCKING God. That was so perfect.

So excuse my language. But I absolutely ADORE this. And I really love the way it's written too, and the tense you used really really worked for this.

And I really showed the insecurities that John had with himself and how he probably felt inferior to Paul, but of course I also beg to differ :P John is incredibly sexy. INCREDIBLY. At least until he grew out his hair and became anorexic looking.

But anyway I absolutely LOVED this once again, short and very straighforward, and it was nice not having to go through a bunch of fluff to get to the point. (though I love fluff too.)

So I'll stop rambling now. :D

semolina_p79 May 20 2010, 08:02:56 UTC

Aw, Johnny. I think he was beautiful every second of his life.

This got me, right here *points to heart* Guh.