passing on the stairs (ch 1)

Feb 11, 2011 21:35

Passing on the Stairs
minho♡key
ch 1⟶pg13; Minho is okay with never getting to know the boy with the retro shades and dress shoes as long as he gets those nice moments while going down the stairs.

He hardly, as in 0.03%, knew him, but he figured he didn’t need to as long as he caught a glimpse of him and kept having those nice encounters, passing on the stairs, so he could breathe in his existence and exhale the possibilities. )

story: passing on the stairs, pairing: minho/key

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spot for mrs_min_ai vyplum February 12 2011, 06:16:36 UTC


mrs_min_ai;; here's da minkey! Yr turn ;p lol hope your comp has escaped the clutches of untimely doom! ❀❀❀

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Re: spot for mrs_min_ai mrs_min_ai February 12 2011, 23:58:17 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

I'M SO SORRY I COULDN'T READ THIS FOR YOU FIRST! I JUST GOT MY COMP TO WORK BUT THIS IS THE VERY FIRST THING I DID! :D

and omfg, i love it, bb!!! i'm so intrigued with this story already. it's so mysterious and well written and it's freaking MINKEY, so yes! lol i honestly have no words for how good this is. i can NOT wait to read more. why do you even need my opinion when you're already so good? ;_;

He hardly, as in 0.03%, knew him, but he figured he didn’t need to as long as he caught a glimpse of him and kept having those nice encounters, passing on the stairs, so he could breathe in his existence and exhale the possibilities.

i honestly love that line. i'm jealous i didn't write it. XD

but aish, i just don't know what else to say! i'm so interested in minho and key's characters. i can't wait to see how this all works out. you are so good, bb! keep up the good work forever!!!!♥

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Re: spot for mrs_min_ai vyplum February 13 2011, 01:16:46 UTC
*glomps* HOLA!

HOORAY YR COMPZ ALIVE!
izzookeeeyy hun! daw you came here first? :D:D:D

"why do you even need my opinion when you're already so good? ;_;"
⟶NUUUU your opinion is everything to me! don't give aaaap! that's how i feel about your fics which are loads better than mine >_> but i still comment, so yea no ok?

"i honestly love that line. i'm jealous i didn't write it. XD"
⟶i wanna feel flattered, i do and i very well should, but i can't help but feel a bit...defensive LOL jkjk i'm beyond flattered, esp coming from youuuuuu

i'm interested in their characters too, i'm waiting for my brain to reveal to me their development LOL

yeyyy your comment made me all kinds of happy ^^ thanks so much again, i don't think i can say that enough. oh but now that your comp is working full force...can you be my beta? :O i reread it and i see mistakes :( so yeazz haaaalp? that way you can be my full fledged beta YAY lol

thanks so much again ♥♥♥

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Re: spot for mrs_min_ai mrs_min_ai February 13 2011, 03:04:51 UTC
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i mean everything i say! :D lol but omg, i'd be a terrible beta. my grammar and sentence structure is atrocious. i'm the one who needs a beta so have no right to beta yours! D: i didn't even notice any mistakes when i read this. i'm that bad. ;_;

but i'll definitely still go over it for you if you need opinions and stuff! i just probably won't pick up any mistakes. >.>

lol but i love you lots! i'm totally tracking all your fics from now on btw. ^-^♥

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spot for tohoginka32 vyplum February 12 2011, 06:22:05 UTC


tohoginka32 are you surprised? I hope so :D lol ♡♡♡

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Re: spot for tohoginka32 vyplum February 12 2011, 23:46:28 UTC

spot for ayeitsdee vyplum February 12 2011, 06:26:33 UTC


ayeitsdee to my fellow newbie poster, hope you like! You post soon too k? :D :D

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Re: spot for ayeitsdee ayeitsdee February 12 2011, 23:52:47 UTC
i has a spot ♥ i feel special
you wrote oneeee! & it's really great. you're a really good writer, too! <3
it's writers like you that have turned me into a minkey shipper.. keke.
your story's so descriptive. & i kinda want to quote some of it, but i might as well just put "read the whole story again."
i loved it! can't wait for the next chapter :)

& when i post a new story, i shall try to use my limited knowledge of LJ-stuff and i'll make a spot for you! (you'll probably be the only spot. nobody reads my stuff T-T)

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Re: spot for ayeitsdee vyplum February 13 2011, 01:01:53 UTC
yay :D:D

& of course! we newbies must stick together like tongue on a frozen pole...uh...yeah o.o lol

i kinda want to quote some of it, but i might as well just put "read the whole story again."
⟶LOL but omg thank you XD actually i don't mind if you quote, i'd like to see what parts stood out for you :D

it's writers like you that have turned me into a minkey shipper
⟶aaah! *blush* i'm glad i had that effect on you! and i totally know what you mean. this fic ( click me i'm a link!) was what did it for me to be a full-fledged minkey shipper , lol

well if you have any questions of lj-postingness just ask meeee i'm cool on helping :D
and aw don't say that, you'll have your little following of readers, you watch! <3

thanks for reading/commenting bb!<3 i'll try to get the creative juices flowing to post :D

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spot for folkin vyplum February 12 2011, 06:52:34 UTC


folkin_up_again b/c you totally caught me by surprise & this the only way I can think of saying thanks o_______o lol <3

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Re: spot for folkin yunho April 5 2011, 01:00:02 UTC
Omg what a bitch i am for not seeing this sooner T____T i'm so sorry!

but this was amazing! especially all the beautiful description at the beginning! and your dialog is very quirky i love it!

Lol oh gosh, this line → Wow, Minho mused to himself, these kids really were the typical abusive upperclassmen weren’t they.

that is an A+ good job line. *applauds*

♥ reading the next part! :D

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Re: spot for folkin vyplum April 5 2011, 02:43:04 UTC
no you're not a bitch! haha i just figured you were caught up with a lot so it's ok no hard feelings or anything :)

i definitely wasn't expecting you to read/comment/LIKE it XD
tbh i wrote the beginning with no intention of making it into a story haha but i'm glad it did and it means a lot tha you like it :):)

my first A+ ;3; *bows teary-eyed*

ahah thank you sooooososooo much for reading! i hope you enjoy the second part and all my other fics (should you choose to read them :D)

♥♥♥

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Re: spot for folkin vyplum April 5 2011, 02:44:32 UTC
and i just noticed your minkey icon

;_________________________;

ilysfm for that

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teenageisland February 12 2011, 06:54:15 UTC
There a growing number (well, two for now) of MinKey's I'm liking right now
It worries me (2min all day, everyday my OTP) but with this wonderful story, I'll make an exception ;)

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teenageisland February 12 2011, 06:55:05 UTC
Sorry if I messed up your spots! >.

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vyplum February 12 2011, 07:06:44 UTC
Lol no I was done :D

& omg T_T you making an exception for meee & being one of the two and just T_T thank you ohgosh. Yeah my main shippage is 2min too so when I wrote this I wtf-d so bad lol I love this combo a lot too.

Oh & yr my first commenter too ^^ *gives cookies* thank you so much for reading and liking and commenting! ♥♥♥

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