a poem i wrote for writing class...

[bearie_pie]

i dont like it much
but it was fun to write
its supposed to be a list poem, whatever the hell that is!

Eyes Always Thinking

Sunday morning

Rises

starting the day

Light through the windows

foggy array

Small bundle

Curled on the couch

eyes always thinking

Watching the house

Inside blankets

and warm sturdy walls

Comments

[colleen22791]

I reaaally like this. I find myself feeling cheesy when I write in rhyme but when I read it I love it so much. I'd like to see more of your writing if you'd let me. much love.

thank you

[bearie_pie]

haha it is cheesy!
i re-read it with that in mind and i was like hitting myself on the head it was sooo cheesy
haha whatever
its funny, i was posting my next poem as you were writing this comment!
<3hannah

Re: thank you

[colleen22791]

I don't think is cheesy at all! I think its really beautiful. Haha I've been meaning to write something about sunday morning; oddly its a popular subject. I really like it, don't think its cheesy.

another poem, from english class

[bearie_pie]

this one isn't my favorite either, but then again i dont usually love any of my poetry! this one also might be a little off from the final copy, because i made some changes after printing this one

Re: another poem, from english class

[colleen22791]

I like this one too, it reads more like a song, in my opinion. keep writing, its beautiful.

[marcat1519]

when i first saw this i thought it was jess and i was like "oh wow, our writing class did that too." but then i saw it was you and i felt stupid. I REALLY LIKE IT THOUGH! and apparently so did ms. strauss.....

[zoe__loves__you]

yo i read this at your house and i still love it<3