I don't have any idea about the actual song, but just reading the lyrics, the original sounds sappy and empty and the update makes me laugh, so in the printed form, it's clearly better.
In your otherwise beautiful poem 'The Vision of Sin' there is a verse which reads -- 'Every moment dies a man, Every moment one is born.' It must be manifest that if this were true, the population of the world would be at a standstill...
I would suggest that in the next edition of your poem you have it read -- 'Every moment dies a man, Every moment one and one-sixteenth is born.'... The actual figure is so long I cannot get it onto a line, but I believe the figure one and one-sixteenth will be sufficiently accurate for poetry.
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In your otherwise beautiful poem 'The Vision of Sin' there is a verse which reads -- 'Every moment dies a man, Every moment one is born.' It must be manifest that if this were true, the population of the world would be at a standstill...
I would suggest that in the next edition of your poem you have it read -- 'Every moment dies a man, Every moment one and one-sixteenth is born.'... The actual figure is so long I cannot get it onto a line, but I believe the figure one and one-sixteenth will be sufficiently accurate for poetry.
I am, Sir, yours, etc.,
Charles Babbage
In googling for this letter, I found that Singh is perfectly aware of it.
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