Fic: SGA: Impulsive, M/S

[beadattitude]

Title: Impulsive
Pairing: John/Rodney
Warnings: None
Rating: PG

Summary: It's the stalk of grass in John's teeth that really sets Rodney off.

This was inspired by an icon I saw today of John and now I can't find it again. Anyway.

I may have absorbed a nickname from lucitania's "One Leg At A Time,"" but it is such an apt name and sprung so easily to

Comments

[outsideth3box]

OMG Peanuts references! I totally heart you liek whoa!

Yummy McShep smooches, yay!

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[beadattitude]

Thank you!

[darkhavens]

Aw, that's a delicious nibbly bit of McSheppiness. :D

[beadattitude]

Thank you!

[pir8fancier]

PEPPERMINT CRABBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HAHAHAHAHAHA!

[beadattitude]

I feel sure I've seen that somewhere else. ::scratches head::

Sweets, could you check a bit of expansion I did on the "John confused by touching" section and see if it works?

Thanky.

[frantic_allonsy]

I believe it's from "One Leg at a Time" by lucitania, but I could be wrong because I can't find the fic now. :(

[beadattitude]

I'm pretty sure that's it. Thanks.

[beachlass]

Mmmm.... lovely ficlet just before bedtime!

[beadattitude]

Love, I tweaked it a bit in the section about John and being touched. Would you look at it and see if it's better this way or the original.

[beachlass]

I do like it this way; agree with pir8fancier that it's not a stupid reason that John is surprised, and I think the way you've rephrased it teases out the pathos just a little bit more.

Pushy, affectionate Rodney is knee meltingly good.

[frantic_allonsy]

Aww. I love John's goofy smile, and I love that it's not surprised anymore because Rodney kissed all the surprise away.

[beadattitude]

Yeah. John needed some convincing, he did.